All Comments on 'The True Measure of Love Ch. 03'

by misterfriz

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hold out

True love indeed. Using another to test one's love. Well written, kept the reader in mystery until the end.

switch53switch53about 12 years ago
Well written.

I definately had to suspend my disbelief with this story. Why all the hoopla, Jasmine should have just taken the sub to Cassandra's house and let the story flow from there. For Jasmine to hide her servitude to Cassandra for 4 years, screams of distrust between the two "lovers". Just hard to imagine that senario in real life. Its sorta like....ummm, just plain overwritten for the sake of "mystery". Keep writing though, please.

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