All Comments on 'Cold Steel'

and I like it.

It seems like the mystery and magic are just starting.

Great job

Good opening part to the story. The action flowed well, and plenty of questions arose to intrigue the reader.

Perhaps a little more description would have enhanced the story and added to the atmosphere. Over all; very good.

Your stories are sooooo far outside the realm of what I normally read, but I can't seen to help myself. They are all well written and manage to keep me sucked in so I have to get to the end.

interesting