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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/09/11

its different...

and I like it.
It seems like the mystery and magic are just starting.

Great job

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by Corpse_rider07/12/11

A story with teeth

Good opening part to the story. The action flowed well, and plenty of questions arose to intrigue the reader.
Perhaps a little more description would have enhanced the story and added to the atmosphere. Over all; very good.

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by Anonymous06/13/12

I like it

Your stories are sooooo far outside the realm of what I normally read, but I can't seen to help myself. They are all well written and manage to keep me sucked in so I have to get to the end.

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