La Belle et Le Bête

Great

Job

*****

Interesting start. Questions to be answered, but I presume they will be.

Five.

interesting but

... I don't get it. How is she all of a sudden a slave?

Good start. Can't wait for the next update.

Thank you guys!

For your comments and for voting! I have already wrote about 1 or 2 more chapters but after having one my best friends tell me it was written like a middle schooler, im thinking about revising this chapter before posting anymore... I also want to add in the breaks between when Zacharie and Belle are talking. They didnt show up but i submitted them like that.

Well what do you guys think?

hey brittyb...

The story is great :)... I'm waiting for the next chapters to see how these characters progress, and please don't keep us waiting too long. keep on writing (:

good start

don't take too long to continue

Great job!

Great job for your first story! Keep writing. I'm looking forward to an update.

Love it!

Great opening chapter. Waiting for chapter 2!!!!!

Oh to be thrust into shit!!!!

My heart went out to Belle from the jump. It is a bitter thing to be robbed of liberty and reminded in small ways of personal impotence. Sucks!!!!!

come back

please come back im interested to see where this goes