All Comments on 'Jack Ch. 01'

Yeah Rachel can do way better than Jack. And I hope during the course of this story she does. Because Jack is being played by his seemingly nieve secretary, and oh how I hope he looses.

Hello everyone. Thanks for reading and voting on my story! If you're interested in what's coming up, keep your eyes open for Chapter 2, where you'll find out what happens with Krista's video, Jack's life begins to spin out of control, and you might even get to meet Jack's daughter!

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What a dumb ass. I saw that coming a mile away. Good story line. Keep going.

Hi...loved the story...waiting for part 2....hope it's coming real soon.