All Comments on 'An Old Flame'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good, but could have been better...

Somehow I had a gut feeling from near the start, that there would be a twist ending here.

Too bad both husband and wife were such total lay-downs in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice twist

great story perfect twist at the end, lucky husband.

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