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My Lust For Another Girl!

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by Captain Midnight07/03/11

Very nice story, well done

I especially liked the descriptive scenes at the beginning, but the entire story was good and believable, considering how swing scenes seem to go in books. I hope you collaborate on more stories and get lots of viewpoints on lovemaking.

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by Corpse_rider07/05/11

Lusty stuff . ..

A great title and a good story. Watch those typos though.
The strength in your story is in conveying a sense of vulnerability in the narrator that helps the reader to empathise with them, a vital aspect to any story and the reason I liked it.

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