All Comments on 'Visit of King and the Knights Ch. 02'

This was the best chapter so far. Good Job :)

I liked it but I would have preferred if you were more realistic with the sex. A boy who was a virgin the day before would have needed some preperation before sex and probably wouldn't have taken 9 inches that easily. Surprised the knight got caught off guard. Guess his guard was down. Sad as he seemed to really care for the boy. I'm glad the kid got away and you have me stumped where you might go with this. I hope he stays stays free and isn't caught by the King and the knights. I'm not so sure since the story is named after them.

its scars not scarves