Cell Mates

This sucks

Not bad.

I disagree with the previous comment. Good read.

You've got too many stories....

...on here to be writing overly simplified storylines with questionable pov assignations. Your member site words belie the fact that you do not "get it". This site is designed for all types of criticism to be utilized by authors to better their writing. It is incredibly arrogant of most writers here to assert that they are above critique. You certainly are no Agatha Christie so learn to accept criticism if you are serious about writing well. Otherwise put a disclaimer in front of your stories letting readers know you don't write to write well so we can avoid wasting precious time.I hope this is an improvement on the previous comments banality.

Yummy

I enjoyed it and it made me warm.

continue pppplllleeeaaassseee

please continue this. so fucking good. :)

Love it.. more?

I LOVE IT! Love it, Love it, Love it!

Are you going to continue?

Good, but..

How about slower penetration, and perhaps a threesome include a busty female guard?