All Comments on 'Apollo Jameson Ch. 01'

...and a little rushed, but the chemistry was good.

oh not bad, yeah a bit fast but still exciting... kudos

The sex was definitely rushed, but I loved the characters.

rushed but good story make anouther and introduce a third character

To your relief I am, well, trying to write chapter 2 but with family I can't have any private time by myself. Anyways I'm introducing a new character, Hermes, I'll just give you details on his personality, he is Greek, he is in Apollo's classes, and believe it or not, HE'S GAY, post questions, and ideas on my page and send me emails about what should be in chapter 2. The more you give the faster you'll be reading. BYE!!!!

*grin* gay twin brothers... can't go wrong there! LOL! And a new character... oh my!

Pollux and Castor were the twins of Gemini, it seems odd that you would use one name to name a twin but not the other.

This was very very rushed. I would suggest you take down the story. Rewrite it and post out again. The concept is good but hasn't been adequately explained..for instance u never explained how those two are demigods...they have parents too...be a little more detailed..