All Comments on 'Hunter Lee, Home at Last Ch. 01'

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bluewillybluebluewillybluealmost 13 years ago
great start

That was a great start, looking forward to chapter 2

Mriceman1964Mriceman1964almost 13 years ago

Very good. Hope next chapter comes soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ok

he needs to dump his wife and stay in texas maybe nora could divorce her hubby and live with him not lola she is to strange

NightReader18NightReader18almost 13 years ago

Amusing story--eccentric sentence structure--at least one line borrowed from Nabokov (lesbian kissing). Nice work!

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