All Comments on 'Tara's Breeding'

The pace and heated sex between three well endowed men and a petite, not so reluctant girl was a fantastic experience reading for me. Hope to read about Tara's second breeding soon. Thanks.

It sue seems like rape to me.

Dear Author,

Good story line with HOT sex scenes - please keep writing!! And I look forward to her 2nd breeding session

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I enjoyed Tara's 1st Breeding very much. Can't wait to read about her 2nd Breeding. Keep up the good work!

Most of us women will never say it out loud but something about an alpha male having his way with you and aggressively wanting to plant his potent seed inside of your fertile womb is such a turn on. I personally am not big on multiple partners but the chemistry between Roy and Tara will definitely have me doing some extra playtime with my toys. I hope you write more yummy stories!!! Xoxo

I usually go for a more explicitly non-consensual scene, but I gotta say that even with the brutal and savage descriptions of the ravishing, which were extremely hot, this story managed to be surprisingly sweet. The ending especially was much nicer than most in this genre - it didn't detract from the intense arousal of the rest of the story with some goofy get-away on the part of the attackers, but left me with a hopeful tease. I'm definitely eager for more!

Stories where a girl goes from reluctant to enthusiastic are always hot. But I loved the drawn-out internal struggle — very well written. And I loved the pregnancy aspect, and the way the thought of being bred was what eventually pushed her over the edge. A few other readers want to see a second breeding, but before that, I'd love to see Tara take these men again while her belly's swollen up with their child!

This story was awesome. :) I loved the suspense!

Good one.

Normally, "woman raped by moving men" doesn't get me, but you wrote it perfectly! The men were super-hot, and the woman was someone I could relate to! I truly felt it, and wanted it. Just a wonderful fantasy that reached inside me. It was so well-written, that it felt real to me.

reminds me of my mom i knocked her up when i was 17 she had my son and she is 67 years old and a slut for me and my son

I think this is even more sexy because as a women the thought of being dominated so completely by being impregnated by the dominate male is just orgasmic I love it

Excellent rape fantasy story, I look forward to more of your hot stories.

Very good story, but it was kinda ruined by the emergency contraception at the end...

Please write another chapter of this story :-) Can't wait!

by far one of the hottest and sexiest stories i have EVER read ;)

roy sounded insanely sexy and so did the other 2 men, and i really liked the fact that tara was really against being raped at first and only totally came around to it at the end. the idea of roy being an Alpha male who beat out all the competition and was the one to really breed her turned me on more than you can know lol ;)

also i felt an odd sort of werewolf sense coming from the men, the way they were all so friggin big and strong and burly, worked almost in a kind of pack, and how they all wanted to "breed" her and how roy bit her in the end almost like marking her as his mate lol but thats probably just me :)

i kinda wish at one point there had been some doubling with the 2 unknown men (lol you should really name them) but all the sex was still insanely hot and amazing ;)

PS as a true southern belle, i really loved your animalistic comparisons in the men, the two bulls and the stallion, made it extra hot for a country girl like me ;)

Was my first time reading a "breeding" story, that was so hot!!

This is one of the hottest stories I have read. A real treat that. Zgirl

Smoking hot, I'd really like a sequel.

I especially love this story because my name happens to be Tara!! So the whole time I was reading I just imagined it was me, and OMG this story turned me on!! Totally deserves a sequel!!

It is as simple as the title of this message

The only thing that annoyed me was that not one of the 3 men could give her a little head, that was the only downfall for me. To the anon before me, all you did was waste the writers time with your cry baby comment, your opinion you should keep to yourself because it is worthless and nobody cares about hearing you cry. GO AWAY.

This was amazing. I feel like you plucked my fantasy out of my head and wrote it down perfectly. My only wish is that she would have woken up next to Roy. Besides that, I couldn't have done much better in re-creating the fantasy. :) don't listen to the haters. You did wonderful. Not just with the story line either. With your grammar, spelling, and word choice. Don't stop writing :)

There's just something about this story. Its the 4th time I've read it, and yet it still seems to get hotter each time

Sooooooooo much win. Keep on keepin on

This woman wants breeding.

Just wanted to let you know, "drug" her isn't correct grammar, it's dragged

the same old missionary position got a little boring. some variety would be nice. her legs over someone's shoulders, on her side with legs tight. and held down by one man while another sucked her breasts, while the other fucked from behind. but undeniably hot. thanks, hope there is more to come.

All I can say is I was so wet that it was running down my thigh even with my panties still on. I think I'm jealous of her and even at my age, would love to get pregnant that way.

Thank you for a good well done story.

i love the story and i do hope that you write more and i will be watching for more!

Very good story hope for more like this soon

This got my lazy weekend day off to a very, very good start--and it's not lazy anymore! Thanks.

great work!

As i read through this all my inner nerd could do was imagine a Werewolf Pack because this reads like something out of World of Darkness. Its been a while since they found a girl like her huh. They are going to breed her. Great story, but all I can think is she is Kinfolk and they are Get of Fenris.

My pussy is drippig soooo much I fucked my ass and pussy sooo hard the whole time I was reading this mst have came like a million times

Wow, wow wow wow. Thank you so much for writing this. it was hot as hell.

I would so love this to happen to me! yum

I loved the tension and suspense, as well as the inevitable risk. My kind of story! Please continue to write, and add more. Maybe Tara runs into a street gang? Maybe her co-workers help her get settled? There are so many ways you can spin this. Please don't let us pass out from holding our breath for the sequel!

In th next chapter you could have yarra get a job with the removable company and every lunch or coffeehouse braek they could use her on the way to the next job..it won't be long just quikys hear and theyr.

If only to stretch out of next few chaptas throw in some cab drivers to the posabilatys are very endless.

Hope you relly consider my seegestions apart from that loved the way you stories flowd........meaning eassy teed for me and my wife together.....when I can control the stiffness!!!!!!

Piece out Gfunk"""

LOVE TO BE BRED LIK THIS MARY

Mmm god I wish they would come breed me!

she would call the police shortly after and report rape, and the men would go to jail for a long time.

So confused

Out of the 30 stories I have read. This one tops the cake. Thank you so much!! Excited to read more of your work.

Brandie

Made me wish I were Tara. Very detailed and I could envision this actually happening. Thanks

Just jocking!!!!!!

This is amusingly reedabelle. Yarra needs my breading, plus all of our brothers in Evanston tyre factory.

Tried to rewd this while walking home from bowling ally.... But every Bastard keeps interruption when I get to the good stuff.

Bite me off a piece?!!! They where all yelling at me. Don't know why or how.

dont like rape. sorry folks but no matter how she ends up wanting it, rape is never cool.

don't like rape? Then what are you doing in the non-consent section of the website, you monumental retard?

Wow. Woild like to fill you up!

Woah... Alright, where can I find those movers?! That was the most I've hit my high from a story; and I've read a good amount of 'em! I loved it; it was extremely hot, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

I wont mind to get fucked like that.

If any of you ladies wish to be bred and are located in Australia, let me know

Know one guy who doesn't like rape, he's been doing life in solitary at Angola prison for his own safety, his fellow con's threatened to do to him what did to his victims, every night over and over again, me I'd do it the Russian way and shoot him in the back of the head.

You should make this into a story

For those interested in an updated version of Tara's Breeding, check out the manuscript for free here: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/485920

Just up with a cup of coffee this morning, and ran across this story. Just imagining getting taken like that....... :)

Brilliantly written and brilliant content, thank you :)

That is the best insult I have heard in a while. We should be friends.

LOL... see it your way... absolutely hilarious

Would have been really hot if two of the guys had stuffed both their cocks in her pussy at the same time! Beautiful piece overall.

It could have been hilarious had not the sex been mechanical!

Is English still strange on the American side of the Atlantic one wonders.

Just one example: "small tome"

A tome is a book, especially a very heavy, large, or learned book.

A picture-album is most assuredly nothing like that in terms of content, nor in size. Where are the editors on this site? ARE there editors on this site?

This story is well written. It made me imagine myself in her position and damn did it seem fun. My mind was able to conjure up all the visual images that was constructed because of your beautiful writing style. Amazing story. I would love to read a part two(2)...

Why do people write these rape fantasies? I don't understand. I love sex and impregnating a woman is quite a thrill. My second wife, I watched her schedule, figured her cycle and figured out what days were probably her most fertile. Add to the fact that sperm can remain viable inside a woman for some hours, it wasn't hard to substitute a placebo for her Birth Controll pills and effectively 'breed' her. She was happy to be pregnant and I love fucking a pregnant woman, so it worked out well. Several times. But rape is just something I don't understand. No man or woman has to be so desparate for sex as to force it onto someone. These men were arrogant and abusive. Not only forceing her to have sex, but to likely have their baby. Many women will not even consider terminating a pregnancy, even from rape. I despise this sort of writing.

I've read this story multiple times and it never fails to turn me into a hot mess. My deepest fantasy to be dominated and bred by an Alpha male. My only fault with this story, its not about me. "Pout"

Loved this story continual fucking by three men -- so hot want to volunteer to be her

Pity you spoiled a fantastic story with the way it ended. The bit about the Morning After Pill, injected a jarring reality into what was a brilliant fantasy. Still, not bad overall

I've read this story probably 20 times, and it still turns me on! They all sound so fucking delicious (yes, I'm one of those females who calls a male's body delicious if it reaches that point; deal with it)!! To the person who wrote "Hateful", some women like the rape scenario because they like the idea of a male showing his dominance over her. Is it possible to show dominance without rape? Yes, but that's not what we want. We want a male to show how much stronger he is than us, to hold us down, to TAKE us, and prove that he is the alpha male. If you don't like it, don't read it. Nobody's forcing you. ;) (bad joke, but I had to do it!) Is rape serious? Yes. But, like I said, some women enjoy it. HELL, TARA EVEN FANTASIZES ABOUT IT!! It was said earlier. Uh-oh, Keep up the good work. And I agree, I hope there's a part 2.

If you substitute a placebo for the pill, congratulations, asshole: You just raped her. SMH.

1. Are these "men" man enough to step up to the plate and help raise any children?

2. What about STDs?

3. Why do they want to get her pregnant?

Yes, let that morning after pill be the very rare failure that is statically insignificant. Did you know some women's sex drive increases as her belly gets bigger during pregnancy? Did you know some men get a greater rush from intercourse with a woman who has a baby bump? a Large baby bump? For some women and men 6, 7, 8, 9 months along is no barrier to great sex, but acts like an aphrodisiac. True, 7 and 8 months make legs over shoulder sex more difficult, not impossible , and rubbing the baby bump and caressing the little fella while pleasuring his/her mom is fantastic. During 8 months doggy should be perfected, and at 9, doggie and anal is Much preferred.

Download the pic's to your computer and tell her to take the camera to school and show all her friends, maybe

you will get some more babysitters??????

I am too old for a baby but I have a black fantasy

my name is Kathie and I want to be bred

my email is kgberr@lakemac.net.

I want to be black bred

Very well written and a pleasing read, but she didnt verbally give consent until Roy, even if she did want it. That makes it rape, and ruins it a little for me

I was mastrubating while reading this story and i organasmed on my finger, so now i have stained sheets

Well, its kinda rape, which ruins it a little for me. Tara didnt give consent until roy, making it seem like the two other men raped her.

Statistically, most people involved enjoy gang rape.

Reminiscent of the great pulp porn from the 60's/70's. Wow - thank you

The story is called NonConsent/Reluctance. Don't say it ruins it for you because it's rape, I.e. NonConsent. If you didn't like that, don't read anything under that fucking tag.

That was so hot I have the same problem wishing that happened to me

I love an nc turned consent type of story. It has intensive hardcore yet romantic sex in it. I especially love how she opened up more by the end of the 2nd breeding (wrapping her legs around the guy's back).

My only problem in the story is that I hadn't noticed any description of the characters, other than her brunette hair, the guys' muscularity, and guys' being hung. Were they black, white, interracial, Latino/Latina? Character description gives the reader something to visualize more. I gave this story a 5 star. But I think it deserves a 4.5 because of that small place of improvement.

Overall: Great. My only issue is that no woman feels anything when the egg gets fertilized. Other than that, great read.

This is type of story is a particular favourite of mine. For my own personal twist I imagined that Tara was my girlfriend and it was me who set it up with the movers. I watched from across the room not lifting a finger to help her. She was so full of gratitude (among other things) as we cuddled up afterwards. Anyway, enough of that! Your story was brilliantly written and 100% smoking hot. You have an excellent way with words and this genre benefits from your presence. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

mm mm MMMMF

Amazing story and very well written. Big kudos to you.

I would also like to be bred in public with people watching. Especially a gangbang would get me off! even more good would unprotected sex so that I might be pregnant even now!

I loved how that superior Black sperm swarmed her white egg doing their role in diluting her race.

I am looking to get bred by a black cock like this. My white pussy is ripe and ready to accept the superior black cock. I know that white people are shit and blacks should own us.

I love men with muscles! Especially the tall guys! This story always helps me through my fertil days.

Three movers and one lovely and assuredly lively young female found just the correct time to be a breeder. Knocked UP? Another chapter to tell the whole (hole) story? Worthy of five stars.

I fucking love black cock . I am a white woman and my fiancé is black and he & his buddies love fucking me. In fact I am recovering from a gangbang with my fiancé and his friends where they all cream pied my pussy.

nothing in the story told us the race of the movers...

I loved this story! What I'd give to be Tara! To be taken repeatedly like that is such a turn on! I wouldn't say no to spending every day like that! Seriously though, great writing (it was very descriptive)!

I would love to be bred like that .. to be filled with hot cum so deeply .. oooohhhh yes

Please think about a followup. This was a good, quality, well-written story, with decent length. A follow-up session at least as long would be very welcome!

Thank you.

My wife told me she would llike to be bred like that. Love the story.

Please continue writing! This is the best story I have read in a long time!

This had me quivering the entire time. I fantasize being bred like that. Hard, relentless, Like an animal in heat. Your writing is amazing. You have a gift. Please give us more!

Since my name is Tara this was like heaven

Just my kind of thing when the sex is at least eventually consensual, you know? Anyway, the rising action and climax were great (pun intended).