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Tara's Breeding

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by Anonymous07/04/11

Excellent Story

The pace and heated sex between three well endowed men and a petite, not so reluctant girl was a fantastic experience reading for me. Hope to read about Tara's second breeding soon. Thanks.

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by Anonymous07/04/11

Rape

It sue seems like rape to me.

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by Anonymous07/10/11

WOW

Dear Author,

Good story line with HOT sex scenes - please keep writing!! And I look forward to her 2nd breeding session

x

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by Anonymous07/10/11

Breeding

I enjoyed Tara's 1st Breeding very much. Can't wait to read about her 2nd Breeding. Keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous07/19/11

Yummy

Most of us women will never say it out loud but something about an alpha male having his way with you and aggressively wanting to plant his potent seed inside of your fertile womb is such a turn on. I personally am not big on multiple partners but the chemistry between Roy and Tara will definitely have me doing some extra playtime with my toys. I hope you write more yummy stories!!! Xoxo

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by Anonymous07/31/11

Very Nice

I usually go for a more explicitly non-consensual scene, but I gotta say that even with the brutal and savage descriptions of the ravishing, which were extremely hot, this story managed to be surprisingly sweet. The ending especially was much nicer than most in this genre - it didn't detract from the intense arousal of the rest of the story with some goofy get-away on the part of the attackers, but left me with a hopeful tease. I'm definitely eager for more!

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by TheStork09/13/11

Super hot

Stories where a girl goes from reluctant to enthusiastic are always hot. But I loved the drawn-out internal struggle — very well written. And I loved the pregnancy aspect, and the way the thought of being bred was what eventually pushed her over the edge. A few other readers want to see a second breeding, but before that, I'd love to see Tara take these men again while her belly's swollen up with their child!

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by sootsprinkles10/03/11

omg

This story was awesome. :) I loved the suspense!

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by Andromeda710/04/11

Good one.

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by Diannah10/29/11

Awesome fantasy!

Normally, "woman raped by moving men" doesn't get me, but you wrote it perfectly! The men were super-hot, and the woman was someone I could relate to! I truly felt it, and wanted it. Just a wonderful fantasy that reached inside me. It was so well-written, that it felt real to me.

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by Anonymous01/07/12

very hot

reminds me of my mom i knocked her up when i was 17 she had my son and she is 67 years old and a slut for me and my son

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by Anonymous01/11/12

I think this is even more sexy because as a women the thought of being dominated so completely by being impregnated by the dominate male is just orgasmic I love it

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by rkxt01/24/12

Excellent rape fantasy story, I look forward to more of your hot stories.

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by Anonymous03/20/12

Very good story, but it was kinda ruined by the emergency contraception at the end...

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by Anonymous04/12/12

tara

Please write another chapter of this story :-) Can't wait!

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by Anonymous05/02/12

FUCKING FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!

by far one of the hottest and sexiest stories i have EVER read ;)
roy sounded insanely sexy and so did the other 2 men, and i really liked the fact that tara was really against being raped at first and only totally came around to it at the end. the idea of roy being an Alpha male who beat out all the competition and was the one to really breed her turned me on more than you can know lol ;)
also i felt an odd sort of werewolf sense coming from the men, the way they were all so friggin big and strong and burly, worked almost in a kind of pack, and how they all wanted to "breed" her and how roy bit her in the end almost like marking her as his mate lol but thats probably just me :)
i kinda wish at one point there had been some doubling with the 2 unknown men (lol you should really name them) but all the sex was still insanely hot and amazing ;)
PS as a true southern belle, i really loved your animalistic comparisons in the men, the two bulls and the stallion, made it extra hot for a country girl like me ;)

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by TerriV05/23/12

WOW

Was my first time reading a "breeding" story, that was so hot!!

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by Anonymous06/23/12

SIZZLING!!!

This is one of the hottest stories I have read. A real treat that. Zgirl

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by bobwies06/26/12

Fantastic story

Smoking hot, I'd really like a sequel.

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by sluttyblakgurl8709/12/12

5 STARS AND A FAVORITE!!!

I especially love this story because my name happens to be Tara!! So the whole time I was reading I just imagined it was me, and OMG this story turned me on!! Totally deserves a sequel!!

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by Anonymous10/14/12

BEST I HAVE READ HERE IN 5 YEARS

It is as simple as the title of this message

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by Anonymous12/06/12

Not bad

The only thing that annoyed me was that not one of the 3 men could give her a little head, that was the only downfall for me. To the anon before me, all you did was waste the writers time with your cry baby comment, your opinion you should keep to yourself because it is worthless and nobody cares about hearing you cry. GO AWAY.

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by SexyTeenGirl02/20/13

Awesome!!!!!

This was amazing. I feel like you plucked my fantasy out of my head and wrote it down perfectly. My only wish is that she would have woken up next to Roy. Besides that, I couldn't have done much better in re-creating the fantasy. :) don't listen to the haters. You did wonderful. Not just with the story line either. With your grammar, spelling, and word choice. Don't stop writing :)

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by Anonymous06/07/13

There's just something about this story. Its the 4th time I've read it, and yet it still seems to get hotter each time

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by Anonymous06/08/13

Yes

Sooooooooo much win. Keep on keepin on

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by Anonymous06/15/13

bred me

This woman wants breeding.

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by Anonymous07/22/13

Just wanted to let you know, "drug" her isn't correct grammar, it's dragged

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by Anonymous08/10/13

different positions

the same old missionary position got a little boring. some variety would be nice. her legs over someone's shoulders, on her side with legs tight. and held down by one man while another sucked her breasts, while the other fucked from behind. but undeniably hot. thanks, hope there is more to come.

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by jenellesl08/17/13

I'm Jealous

All I can say is I was so wet that it was running down my thigh even with my panties still on. I think I'm jealous of her and even at my age, would love to get pregnant that way.
Thank you for a good well done story.

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by BadCittyLady08/26/13

Great!

i love the story and i do hope that you write more and i will be watching for more!

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by Anonymous08/27/13

Brilliant

Very good story hope for more like this soon

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by dorkgirlalamode09/10/13

Great work!

This got my lazy weekend day off to a very, very good start--and it's not lazy anymore! Thanks.

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by Anonymous11/20/13

fucktastic!

great work!

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by Anonymous11/26/13

Is it bad?

As i read through this all my inner nerd could do was imagine a Werewolf Pack because this reads like something out of World of Darkness. Its been a while since they found a girl like her huh. They are going to breed her. Great story, but all I can think is she is Kinfolk and they are Get of Fenris.

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by Anonymous01/26/14

wow

My pussy is drippig soooo much I fucked my ass and pussy sooo hard the whole time I was reading this mst have came like a million times

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by Anonymous02/26/14

Wow, wow wow wow. Thank you so much for writing this. it was hot as hell.

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by Anonymous03/03/14

I would so love this to happen to me! yum

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by satinlvr_mwf03/10/14

Well Done... and I'm adding you to my favorites!

I loved the tension and suspense, as well as the inevitable risk. My kind of story! Please continue to write, and add more. Maybe Tara runs into a street gang? Maybe her co-workers help her get settled? There are so many ways you can spin this. Please don't let us pass out from holding our breath for the sequel!

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by blackg04/16/14

maybe New job

In th next chapter you could have yarra get a job with the removable company and every lunch or coffeehouse braek they could use her on the way to the next job..it won't be long just quikys hear and theyr.
If only to stretch out of next few chaptas throw in some cab drivers to the posabilatys are very endless.
Hope you relly consider my seegestions apart from that loved the way you stories flowd........meaning eassy teed for me and my wife together.....when I can control the stiffness!!!!!!

Piece out Gfunk"""

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by marypatmnmwf04/19/14

mary schelske

LOVE TO BE BRED LIK THIS MARY

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by daddysbabygirl9304/25/14

mmmmmmm

Mmm god I wish they would come breed me!

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by Anonymous07/12/14

meanwhile in real life

she would call the police shortly after and report rape, and the men would go to jail for a long time.

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by Anonymous07/17/14

First she was in heat then she wasn't???

So confused

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by Anonymous07/18/14

best story so far that I've read from this site!

Out of the 30 stories I have read. This one tops the cake. Thank you so much!! Excited to read more of your work.
Brandie

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by Anonymous08/01/14

Totally Hot

Made me wish I were Tara. Very detailed and I could envision this actually happening. Thanks

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by blackg08/14/14

tottally unrredabele

Just jocking!!!!!!
This is amusingly reedabelle. Yarra needs my breading, plus all of our brothers in Evanston tyre factory.
Tried to rewd this while walking home from bowling ally.... But every Bastard keeps interruption when I get to the good stuff.

Bite me off a piece?!!! They where all yelling at me. Don't know why or how.

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by jott5009/20/14

dont like rape. sorry folks but no matter how she ends up wanting it, rape is never cool.

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by Anonymous09/20/14

Jott50

don't like rape? Then what are you doing in the non-consent section of the website, you monumental retard?

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by Anonymous09/21/14

give me a call sometine :-)

Wow. Woild like to fill you up!

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by Anonymous10/15/14

Damn

Woah... Alright, where can I find those movers?! That was the most I've hit my high from a story; and I've read a good amount of 'em! I loved it; it was extremely hot, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

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