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Tara's Breeding

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/22/14

yes yes yes

I wont mind to get fucked like that.

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by analslut197111/04/14

If any of you ladies wish to be bred and are located in Australia, let me know

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by Anonymous11/11/14

Know one guy who doesn't like rape, he's been doing life in solitary at Angola prison for his own safety, his fellow con's threatened to do to him what did to his victims, every night over and over again, me I'd do it the Russian way and shoot him in the back of the head.

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by Anonymous11/11/14

You should make this into a story

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by uh-oh11/12/14

Update

For those interested in an updated version of Tara's Breeding, check out the manuscript for free here: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/485920

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by 11/16/14

Imagining

Just up with a cup of coffee this morning, and ran across this story. Just imagining getting taken like that....... :)

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by DaddysGoldenGirl11/23/14

Fabulous

Brilliantly written and brilliant content, thank you :)

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by Belle_Marie12/20/14

Anon who just used the insult "monumental retard..."

That is the best insult I have heard in a while. We should be friends.

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by Anonymous12/20/14

@ belle-marie

LOL... see it your way... absolutely hilarious

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by Anonymous01/02/15

double vag

Would have been really hot if two of the guys had stuffed both their cocks in her pussy at the same time! Beautiful piece overall.

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by Anonymous01/24/15

the old one

It could have been hilarious had not the sex been mechanical!
Is English still strange on the American side of the Atlantic one wonders.

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by Anonymous02/21/15

Illiterate!

Just one example: "small tome"
A tome is a book, especially a very heavy, large, or learned book.

A picture-album is most assuredly nothing like that in terms of content, nor in size. Where are the editors on this site? ARE there editors on this site?

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by Anonymous03/04/15

Quality

This story is well written. It made me imagine myself in her position and damn did it seem fun. My mind was able to conjure up all the visual images that was constructed because of your beautiful writing style. Amazing story. I would love to read a part two(2)...

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by Anonymous04/01/15

hateful

Why do people write these rape fantasies? I don't understand. I love sex and impregnating a woman is quite a thrill. My second wife, I watched her schedule, figured her cycle and figured out what days were probably her most fertile. Add to the fact that sperm can remain viable inside a woman for some hours, it wasn't hard to substitute a placebo for her Birth Controll pills and effectively 'breed' her. She was happy to be pregnant and I love fucking a pregnant woman, so it worked out well. Several times. But rape is just something I don't understand. No man or woman has to be so desparate for sex as to force it onto someone. These men were arrogant and abusive. Not only forceing her to have sex, but to likely have their baby. Many women will not even consider terminating a pregnancy, even from rape. I despise this sort of writing.

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I've read this story multiple times and it never fails to turn me into a hot mess. My deepest fantasy to be dominated and bred by an Alpha male. My only fault with this story, its not about me. "Pout"

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by Anonymous04/12/15

HOT FUCKING

Loved this story continual fucking by three men -- so hot want to volunteer to be her

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by abington04/17/15

Morning after pill

Pity you spoiled a fantastic story with the way it ended. The bit about the Morning After Pill, injected a jarring reality into what was a brilliant fantasy. Still, not bad overall

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by Anonymous05/01/15

damn...

I've read this story probably 20 times, and it still turns me on! They all sound so fucking delicious (yes, I'm one of those females who calls a male's body delicious if it reaches that point; deal with it)!! To the person who wrote "Hateful", some women like the rape scenario because they like the idea of a male showing his dominance over her. Is it possible to show dominance without rape? Yes, but that's not what we want. We want a male to show how much stronger he is than us, to hold us down, to TAKE us, and prove that he is the alpha male. If you don't like it, don't read it. Nobody's forcing you. ;) (bad joke, but I had to do it!) Is rape serious? Yes. But, like I said, some women enjoy it. HELL, TARA EVEN FANTASIZES ABOUT IT!! It was said earlier. Uh-oh, Keep up the good work. And I agree, I hope there's a part 2.

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by Anonymous05/07/15

to "hateful"

If you substitute a placebo for the pill, congratulations, asshole: You just raped her. SMH.

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by Anonymous06/04/15

A FEW QUESTIONS

1. Are these "men" man enough to step up to the plate and help raise any children?
2. What about STDs?
3. Why do they want to get her pregnant?

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by Anonymous06/05/15

Great story, why did you stop? Pregnancy does not stop sex.

Yes, let that morning after pill be the very rare failure that is statically insignificant. Did you know some women's sex drive increases as her belly gets bigger during pregnancy? Did you know some men get a greater rush from intercourse with a woman who has a baby bump? a Large baby bump? For some women and men 6, 7, 8, 9 months along is no barrier to great sex, but acts like an aphrodisiac. True, 7 and 8 months make legs over shoulder sex more difficult, not impossible , and rubbing the baby bump and caressing the little fella while pleasuring his/her mom is fantastic. During 8 months doggy should be perfected, and at 9, doggie and anal is Much preferred.

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by Anonymous06/08/15

Camera

Download the pic's to your computer and tell her to take the camera to school and show all her friends, maybe
you will get some more babysitters??????

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by Anonymous06/29/15

oh jeez wish i could have been bred like that

I am too old for a baby but I have a black fantasy
my name is Kathie and I want to be bred
my email is kgberr@lakemac.net.
I want to be black bred

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by Anonymous07/20/15

Enjoyable read but what about consent?

Very well written and a pleasing read, but she didnt verbally give consent until Roy, even if she did want it. That makes it rape, and ruins it a little for me

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by Anonymous07/29/15

I was mastrubating while reading this story and i organasmed on my finger, so now i have stained sheets

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by Anonymous08/22/15

Well, its kinda rape, which ruins it a little for me. Tara didnt give consent until roy, making it seem like the two other men raped her.

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by Anonymous08/27/15

Fun

Statistically, most people involved enjoy gang rape.

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by Manila201408/30/15

Reminiscent of the great pulp porn from the 60's/70's

Reminiscent of the great pulp porn from the 60's/70's. Wow - thank you

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by Anonymous09/07/15

To everyone complaining

The story is called NonConsent/Reluctance. Don't say it ruins it for you because it's rape, I.e. NonConsent. If you didn't like that, don't read anything under that fucking tag.

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by Anonymous09/27/15

it was so hot made me cum a lot

That was so hot I have the same problem wishing that happened to me

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by GuyJD10/12/15

Awesome story but...

I love an nc turned consent type of story. It has intensive hardcore yet romantic sex in it. I especially love how she opened up more by the end of the 2nd breeding (wrapping her legs around the guy's back).

My only problem in the story is that I hadn't noticed any description of the characters, other than her brunette hair, the guys' muscularity, and guys' being hung. Were they black, white, interracial, Latino/Latina? Character description gives the reader something to visualize more. I gave this story a 5 star. But I think it deserves a 4.5 because of that small place of improvement.

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by Anonymous10/24/15

Nice.

Overall: Great. My only issue is that no woman feels anything when the egg gets fertilized. Other than that, great read.

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by James_B12/14/15

Absolutely Superb!

This is type of story is a particular favourite of mine. For my own personal twist I imagined that Tara was my girlfriend and it was me who set it up with the movers. I watched from across the room not lifting a finger to help her. She was so full of gratitude (among other things) as we cuddled up afterwards. Anyway, enough of that! Your story was brilliantly written and 100% smoking hot. You have an excellent way with words and this genre benefits from your presence. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

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by Seeder93702/06/16

I want to get raped but dp me!

mm mm MMMMF

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by melanieatplay02/11/16

Loved it!

Amazing story and very well written. Big kudos to you.

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by Anonymous02/22/16

Loved it.

I would also like to be bred in public with people watching. Especially a gangbang would get me off! even more good would unprotected sex so that I might be pregnant even now!

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by Anonymous03/03/16

Perfect

I loved how that superior Black sperm swarmed her white egg doing their role in diluting her race.

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by Anonymous03/17/16

Looking for black bull

I am looking to get bred by a black cock like this. My white pussy is ripe and ready to accept the superior black cock. I know that white people are shit and blacks should own us.

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by Anonymous03/22/16

a man with muscles

I love men with muscles! Especially the tall guys! This story always helps me through my fertil days.

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by thebug3704/10/16

Moving Day

Three movers and one lovely and assuredly lively young female found just the correct time to be a breeder. Knocked UP? Another chapter to tell the whole (hole) story? Worthy of five stars.

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by Anonymous05/04/16

I fucking love black cock . I am a white woman and my fiancé is black and he & his buddies love fucking me. In fact I am recovering from a gangbang with my fiancé and his friends where they all cream pied my pussy.

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by Anonymous05/06/16

what.

nothing in the story told us the race of the movers...

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by Anonymous05/18/16

Wow...

I loved this story! What I'd give to be Tara! To be taken repeatedly like that is such a turn on! I wouldn't say no to spending every day like that! Seriously though, great writing (it was very descriptive)!

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by BrendaNW06/08/16

so hot

I would love to be bred like that .. to be filled with hot cum so deeply .. oooohhhh yes

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by Anonymous07/05/16

FIVE+ stars!!!

Please think about a followup. This was a good, quality, well-written story, with decent length. A follow-up session at least as long would be very welcome!
Thank you.

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by knickerlover1307/22/16

Hot

My wife told me she would llike to be bred like that. Love the story.

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by Anonymous07/23/16

O...M...G

Please continue writing! This is the best story I have read in a long time!

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by Anonymous07/29/16

SO HOT

This had me quivering the entire time. I fantasize being bred like that. Hard, relentless, Like an animal in heat. Your writing is amazing. You have a gift. Please give us more!

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by Anonymous08/05/16

wow

Since my name is Tara this was like heaven

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Impressive.

Just my kind of thing when the sex is at least eventually consensual, you know? Anyway, the rising action and climax were great (pun intended).

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