All Comments on 'You Never Know Ch. 01'

Wonderful job! I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Write more soon <3

Stressed me out, haha. Good job. It would flow better if you had used names though (although I understand not wanting to use real ones).

But can you make up some actual names instead of S and J? They interrupt the flow.

I like the plot a lot; it is very unique from other stories I have read on this site. I can't wait to see where it goes..

Loved it, but could you please use names instead of initials?

I stopped reading the instant I saw that you were using intials instead of names. Are you that lazy that you can't type in the names of your characters? If you don't care enough about them, then why should we?

This is really good so far and I think that the "S" thing is quite cool and adds some mystery or whatever aswell so ignore the anonymous person from 08/08/11.

They're talking rubbish.

Really excited to see what happens next!