Falling for Jennifer

Beautiful Love Story

All I can say is that I wish you were my sister and it was our love story

WOW....

i have read this a number of times...'
and just as good or better each time.

To say that I was

totally sucked into this seems so much less than it was ... imagination is so much of the things we do and yours is just soo hot and perfect that I want what you wrote, every little drop of it every inch inside of you. Thank you for sharing the fantasy and making me come without even a touch. That's never happened before. Your words and what you were describing took me there with you and left me feeling all of those things you .. slowrdr@ aol.com now I'll just wander around bumping in to doors for awhile

WOW...

Everyone is falling for Jennifer.....beautiful story.

Wow!

That was hot!

Vivid

Easily one of the best descriptive stories I've read. Great job!

I'm humbled

Sometimes I fall into the trap of believing I can write, and then I run across a story like this. It snapped me back to the reality that while I can tell a story, I'm not a writer. This author can both tell a story and string words together in a most beautiful and vivid way. I am simply humbled by such talent.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Gina

tears from a hopeless romantic
stars for this story should be hearts
it is unfair that we cannot give some kind of award that would set this story apart from all others

Brilliantly written.

Perfect. Wish I could have given it a 6. Continuing on, (and this isn't as far out as many would think) I think this is a true love story that eventually has them moving out after mom passes on to somewhere where no one knows them, and living as a couple . I know a pair, now in their mid-30's, brother and sister and no one knows what happens behind closed doors. .

brilliant

Reminded me so much of my moments with my sister. Want to read more about these two to see how you will end it hoping it will turn out better than mine did.

One of the best

Yaaaas! Lovein it!!😘😘😘

U are talented, plz write a piss fetish sister story like 'How is it with lindy', it is the best fetish story i ever read.. Only you can beat this story...

WOW!!

Wonderful story! So sweet, so sensual, so real, so much like many of us have lived - regardless of what the future brought. Please continue the saga...........

Beautiful use of the English language

The strength of this story is not character development (no room for that in a short story) or a novel excuse to introduce the incest (which is pretty standard) but is the way you play with words and sentences to create some of the best writing I've ever read on this site. One small comment would be that this somewhat breaks down during sex scenes, with the incomplete and single-word sentences becoming a little bit tiring to read.

Excellent

I like the cadence, or flow of your writing. It's smooth as it builds. It's like it reads itself to you. And so hot. Nice, thank you.