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Not What It Seems Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by EOLover07/10/11

I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

I've been waiting on this story and you did not disappoint me. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good Luck on your new job and your next chapter. Thanks
so much...

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by Anonymous07/11/11

I love this story, but when are they going to find out Alin is pregnant? please forgive me if you mentioned she was on the pill in an earlier chapter, and they certainly don't seem to be using condoms.

Also there's no need to apologise for how long it takes to submit a chapter. Good luck with your new job.

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by Anonymous07/12/11

Well worth the wait! And well John is certainly going to stir the pot.

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by Anonymous07/21/11

well i think two things are going to happen: 1 john tries to rape her, and jared finds out and breaks his bones...or two. he finds out and we go back to the beginning where he treats her like a whore, either way good job, even tho i waited a lifetime for this chapter x.x

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by Anonymous08/31/11

hurry

please hurry and continue... i come and check ever night it seems in hope for more..

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by Anonymous11/18/11

Definitely one of the best series in Literotica. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous03/30/12

more

please update

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by Anonymous09/02/12

Oh for God's Sake...

This is getting fucking ridiculous!!

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by solotoro10/20/12

Saving the language

If you "literally" have no life for a 19 year-old, then YOU'RE DEAD. I think you're statement was meant to be "figurative". How did your English exam go?

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by EuphoriaSlam6912/29/12

Hahahahahahahahahahaha haters!

Hilarious!

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