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Cold Steel Ch. 03

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by verbicide07/10/11

more please...

I know this fable could end right here, but I'm going to request more anyway. It's just that good.

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by Anonymous05/06/12

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! YOU ENDED IT AND YOU COULD HAVE SHOWN US SOOOO MUCH MORE!
You could make Meg regain her memories. She could gain enough self control to change her metal body into anything she wanted. You could make a new plotline several years later where the corrupt and evil rebels are overthrown by Meg and the people who have come to respect her. So many options to continue this breathtaking story! (by the way, if this wasn't erotic/horror literature you could certainly publish it and the public would just eat it up)

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