Hilarious! Just the laugh I needed this morning. The sex and humiliation could have been erotic, but phrases like "cuntstuffer", "baby batter" and "man chowder" make this story hopelessly comical. Thanks for the giggles!
BDSM is not my cup of tea (pee?) but I got a kick out of reading this story. I'm a natural submissive and MAYBE could be pushed over the edge by the right Master!
I'd love to read about Kevin sharing Felicity with his like-minded friends.
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Anonymous07/31/11
trying a little too hard. overuse of some phrases, most of which are cliched. and the dialogue was unbelievable. no man would ever say "man chowder" or "baby batter". that's just... no.
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Anonymous02/25/13
Soo . . .
How do you guys even notice those words (Man chowder), doesn't any one else masturbate when they read these?
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Anonymous04/09/14
Would someone treat me this way? Pls someone treat me like a cheap bitch.
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Anonymous08/17/15
Came so hard thank you
That's so good I wish my good for nothing husband would be like this...
The last line wasn't redemption enough
for the previous vulgarity. But thanks for writing.
Just a hint, my friend.
the depraved filth I needed...
Loved it!!!
I wish someone would treat me this way. Great story!!
Hilarious! Just the laugh I needed this morning. The sex and humiliation could have been erotic, but phrases like "cuntstuffer", "baby batter" and "man chowder" make this story hopelessly comical. Thanks for the giggles!
Wow....
Had my attention the whole time, very nice read!
First BDSM for me
BDSM is not my cup of tea (pee?) but I got a kick out of reading this story. I'm a natural submissive and MAYBE could be pushed over the edge by the right Master!
very good, i love the ending
:)
really great ending. it helps remind you that they're married, and really wraps it up.
Loved it
the ending was great!
nice
I'd love to read about Kevin sharing Felicity with his like-minded friends.
trying a little too hard. overuse of some phrases, most of which are cliched. and the dialogue was unbelievable. no man would ever say "man chowder" or "baby batter". that's just... no.
Soo . . .
How do you guys even notice those words (Man chowder), doesn't any one else masturbate when they read these?
Would someone treat me this way? Pls someone treat me like a cheap bitch.
Came so hard thank you
That's so good I wish my good for nothing husband would be like this...
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