All Comments on 'Twin Tigers'

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u got me hooked

wen is d next one coming............

Very interesting story line can't wait for the next one

you've got me very interested in wanting to know what happens next in this story.

keep writing

As I'm writing a story about tigers as well. I thought I would read yours and see what it was like.

I must say I like what you have written so far.

was confusing. In some ways it was like a little kids story where they make up new powers to overcome any problems. I suggest slowing the pace a little to let the story develop itself in the readers mind.

Good. Can't wait for next updat

yes keep going loved it

I want to hear more

I really like what I've read so far. Keep it comming please.

You so need to keep going. Also thank you for using my favorite animals, white tigers

That was too short quit teasing us.

Good start. I assume their parents made it that they wouldn't come into their powers till they're 21 so I'm surprised Addie was using hers when she fell. I hope you'll tell us more about the abilities these weres have since you've gone outside the normal things attributed to them (which is great...I like different)like magic and teleportation. Keep writing.

Love the start of this story, but I hesitate to get invested....what if you loose the "spark" for this story, too?

I love it four stars you lost one cause it is too short.

I didn't realize it was short because in word its like 6 pages! But I don't think I'm going to lose the spark for this story because I'm too invested into it. The chapters are coming out slow because I now have to share a computer and have very little time to write. I promise ill try to make it longer and will finish it, you just have to give me time to write.

Wondering what happened to Oren?

Will Ana meet at some point Nicolai?

Will Paul stalk Adie

I like it so far

Up to the next chapter ^_^

Just how i like it.. great flow with teh storyline easy to follow and the characters i feel drawing me in slowly with expectations of a good read.

I like your style sir

...and your storyline is interesting...very. Yet when it came to one of the twins "seeing" her mate and having a physical reaction....the descriptions or setting up of sexual tension fell short. Since you've finished or added many additonal stories by the time I started this, you may have improved in your writing skills...I hope so, I will give it a couple of more before just leaving...sorry...your characters interaction and dialogue are choppy and weak. Hope it gets better....It's your universe and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing thru...and it ain't pretty.

It was a great story and had a good flow. If you have seen twitches which is a movie about twin witches you have magical powers that they discover on their 21st birthday. Your story kinda reminds me of theirs but it is still completely different. The bottom line is that i like it so keep writing.

Great start! I sure hope this story is one of those that is actually finished. Fingers are crossed to make sure we all aren't left hanging!

Tigers are solitary and do not form mated pairs for more than a few days. Tigers don't mate for life. The concept of "alphas" doesn't apply to non-social animals.

The alpha/beta/etcetera concept is massively misunderstood outside of scientific circles. It was full of mistakes when it was popularized. In a wolf pack alpha male is synonymous with father, alpha female with mother. The "betas" would be older children who hadn't moved on to form their own pack yet. Werewolf stories fowl this up all the time.

@Grunt really dude? Just go away

GoesGrunt this is XxEarBudsxX’s fantasy. If they want mated pairs, then they GET mated pairs! Please keep writing, love it so far.