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Anonymousalmost 13 years agoRunning a spell check wouldn't be a bad idea BEFORE submitting any story ... just sayin' ....
Anonymousover 6 years agoIdea interesting but...
Your grammar and spelling mistakes made reading your story almost impossible. I think you have an interesting idea, but you need a lot of work. Proofread...proofread...
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