Truth or Dare Daddy! Ch. 01

Ch. 2

Was this really chapter 2? or was your other truth or dare story the prologue?

I don't get it. Truth or Dare?

Your story was full of sex but it really was just a series of rushed fucks everywhere they went. This had no real theme or a story. It was full of grammatical errors and completely missed the Truth or Dare idea.

Maybe you should have written about how they got started together then you could have written this as Part 2. Then you can add Trevor in Part 3. You skipped back and forth from "she even called ME daddy" and "they laughed at US" to describing Luke in the third person. Use an editor. Keep writing it will get better.

hot

now we have a new person in the story...well done

SSSSSSSSSSmokin'!

A Father-Daughter-Son threesome would be so cool!

CHAPTER 2

This was Chapter 2, sorry, if you haven't read Part 01, please do, I don't know how to fix this.

daddy take her in all holes

wow what a fantastic brilliant story you write.
the best story for such a long time. i for one would love another part or parts of this out standing story. more.

Please

Wow, please write more!

Too bad

Really liked the first story, then you start with anal, now it looks like you're going for FMM 3-way. What next? Gay, BSDM? Maybe the "Similar Stories" won't be so similar and more like the first. first=5, this=1

mother and brother

I want know what happens next! The mother and brother get inv
olved?

VACATION TIME

NOW THIS STORY I LIKE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS I THINK THE MOTHER AND SON SHOULD GET IT ON WHEN DADDY AND DAUGHTER GO ON VACATION
AGAIN ,I THINK THE MOM SHOULD FIND THE PIVTURES AND THEN CONFESS
THAT SHE AND HER SON ARE GETTING IT ON THEY CAN GO ON VACATION
IN THE SAME PLACE OR NOT SO FAR THIS I WOULD RATE A 5 STAR PLUS
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.....................................''R''.... ........................

more

More please!

Seems to be getting a bit too familyish to me:/ at first I figured the wife was either fucking someone on the side or fucking her son when she readily agreed for him to stay gone one more day.
It was a turnoff to me when he couldnt get it up for his wife when she wanted him, that was pretty pathetic, but then he could for a picture :( Im ok with him banging his daughter, but if his wife still loves him and wants to fuck him, even if she doesnt give him everything he wants, he should still be able to get it up for her, lol. (Unless she got big and fat or something and thats a turnoff)

The other big turnoff is the lack of an actual sex scene here. I was looking forward to an anal scene and all we got was a one liner saying she was willing even though it hurt some, then one liners of other places they fucked. Im ok with cutting short on repetitive sex like that, but give it up on some of it, lol!
...and I could care less about the son getting involved. Nothing sucks more than additional men in a story!!