All Comments on 'My True Self Ch. 01'

...like chapter 2. I think her realization and torment could have been drawn out a bit more, but really that's only my personal preference. I find it odd that the main character didn't go through any mental anguish as to who was putting her through the ordeal, but in the end it left me wondering exactly who she meets at the club. Patiently waiting for Chapter 2. ;)

It has started so well and there is so much we are not in the picture about yet; you really can't just leave us here!

I look forward to reading part two as soon as you can write it for us, and many thanks for sharing an obvious talent with us all.

I think you did a good job and look forward to part two.

good job! looking forward to more.

An intriguing start, but too short an instalment - merely wet my appetite.