All Comments on 'My Crazy Neighbor'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wish....

Wish I had a real neighbor like that and not get all mushy and serious and want to move in or get married.! Very good short story and in these days ~~ very believable.*

MaryAnn678MaryAnn678almost 13 years ago
Oral Sex

Somehow it seems every sex act has to start with a blow job. Even then there is a specified amount of "pre-cum," a condition which doesn't happen every time, and never in the copious amounts claimed in every literotica story. How about just a good hot, hard fucking. It really happens.

kingleonidasskingleonidassalmost 13 years ago
A little short

The details seemed a little herky jerky. I liked the story but it is kinda unusual. Take your time on the next one and flesh out the characters ok?

CharlieDuncanCharlieDuncanabout 6 years ago
Part 2?

I realize this post is more than six years old, but .... no follow-up? Other renditions of this guy doing her; maybe involve one of her nudist friends for a MFF, or just the opposite, have the guy "bring over a frind" for some neighborly MMF.

And how about that daughter? Tons of angles there to pursue.

If you ever become an active writer again, this would be a great place to start.

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