by exquisitelifetime
Quit reading after I read that he had a huge Cock -- you people that write about huge Cocks must a complex because yours is so small.! What a waste.!*
You got one 'star' and lucky to get that.*
The dialogue is far too awkward [she pinched me "oww. why did you pinch me?"] the first 4 or 5 paragraphs are about her toys, and her plans. the build up gets repetitive.
Don't give up though :)