by Strawberry_2051
Buy a dictionary. (The paper kind. Spellcheck won't do the job.)
Some mispellings and word check messed up a few but the story is getting more interesting
I didn't even notice the misspellings. (Did I spell that right?) But I did enjoy the peeking/peaking/pieking and even the swimming race fiasco/feasco/feeassko.
Don't be so critical.The author is clearly not a pro, but isn't that a part of what makes these stories so interesting?
I think the mistakes add to the "real" feeling of the writing.
An older story, so and advice will probable not be read.