by Strawberry_2051
In the part, early on, about the judges scorings, I was wondering if the judges had been paid off. Afterwards, good continuation (with parts that were downright funny). It will be interesting to see what you do with "Sullivan and Sarah and Aline".
So Aline, who supposedly doesn't have much confidence, first goes after Karen's boyfriend, and is now going to go after Sullivan, who for all intents and purposes has a girlfriend he probably got pregnant already?
I liked it when Aline raced against the German swimmer and won. No one feels sorry for a German, even those of us with German ancestry. It's nice to see Aline's Scotch-Irish "mad dog" style win, even if it only happens in fiction!