Little Sister's Initiation

Straight to the Point

It was good. But it could do with a little more build up and description. It helps some of the readers with a more active imagination.

This could be a great series, if you made into one. But, my suggestion is to drag out the story just a bit more. For me, it was just over too fast. But again, great job. Keep it up. :]

DITTO 1

COMPLETELY AGREE with preceding comment.

Sister Love

I love to hear what happen after there breakfast and what her bother had MMMMMMMMMMMM

I love the whole twin thing but a little more prestorie would have been nice but over all good story

WOW - very arousing and the dialogue among the 2 sisters and brother while limited, started their new adventure off well. I hope you write a second chapter soon, as there are all kinds of great things that can happen now. I think the older sister should eat little sister's pussy and the brother should screw his older sister while Little Sis watches !! We need some descriptive info about all 3 siblings and more dirty ideas and dialogue among themselves. Thanks !