All Comments on 'Home Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!!

great sexy chapter! keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Job!

I loved this chapter. I love the whole story line actually. I feel like it is going to go toward Peyton getting pregnant (hint, hint) and the things that will happen after that. Nate's insecurities will really come to the surface. You are doing an excellent job so keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Can't wait

Great writing can't wait for the next chp

honeybreehoneybreeover 12 years ago
Update soon I can't wait to see where this goes!

Loving this story so far and love the connection and chemistry Peyton and Nate are making and letting grow. But her sister...DRAMA I can't wait to see where that bump in the road is headed

trupactrupacover 12 years ago
hoooooooooooot

can Peyton give her sister a slap, rude I say. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ideal reaction

in my opinion only, peyton delivers a wickedright hook and nate closes the door, end of problem

got2luvmelgot2luvmelover 12 years ago
Is This Bitch Serious?

I would just pimp slap that ho and throw her out like the trash that she is; same goes for Addison the next time she came sniffing round my man and acting a fool (well, after I got a new job and an excellent reference LMAO I might be crazy but I ain't stupid).

Great chapter, Nate/Peyton are adorable and so HOT together, can't wait to see where you take them next XD

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
hi victoria.. this is the audience of this story

On behalf of those who are rooting for nate and payton.....

Get a life, shut up and find your own.....

Wonderful story!

Tierra22Tierra22over 12 years ago
OMG

I love this story and I can't wait for the next installment. Nate and Peyton finally do the do and Vicki shows up. OMG!

lili82lili82over 12 years ago
who the fuck is this bitch?!!!

this victoria bitch has a lot of nerve to just show up on someone's doorstep like she about to regulate things! Peyton better knock this broad out eventually! S/N: 5 Stars!!!!

haitiancutiehaitiancutieover 12 years ago
Who the he'll does she think she is

Peyton You better fuck your sister up how dare she go up to your man and act like that. She cut you off when your father died and prevented you from finding a job and have access to the money your father left you. Don't make her spoil your happiness

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I need to know what happens next. Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Crazy!

Are there people out there as ridiculous and over-the-top evil as this stepsister character?! She's crazy!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
What is this bitch's issue

Poisonous, malignant people seem to know when someone is happy. It is so very gross their incredible sense of timing.

I look forward to seeing how Peyton rids herself of this cancer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hello!

"Hello," she said in a stern voice. "My name is Victoria Cavanaugh, and I believe you are fucking my sister."

What an introduction!

PrettygoldendragonPrettygoldendragonover 10 years ago
What type of church was that? lmao

I'm all for a down to earth church. Jane basically handed the girl a free sex pass lol I damn thought she was going to pull out condoms too funny

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Oooh I would've slapped her and slammed the door

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezabout 10 years ago
LOL@Prettygoldendragon

LOLL if only those churches really exist.

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