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livingforfunlivingforfunover 12 years agoAuthor
Suggestions

I really do like to draw these pictures and I would like any suggestions you may have for future pictures. Give me a challenge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot

I love suggestive images. It is so much hotter when you can't see everything.

It's such a turn on to see her on top and moving up his body.

BBW FanBBW Fanover 12 years ago

Another great work. I love the feel of the medium. It works well with the feel of the piece. It's soft and fluid.. like the waters on the shore or the feel of a woman's soft breasts. Wonderful!

Marguerite01Marguerite01over 12 years ago
Well done

Great textural contrasts with the denim and skin, nice composition.

necouple69xxxnecouple69xxxover 12 years ago
well done

very hot ad passionate

DomwoolfDomwoolfover 12 years ago
best yet

You are one of the few that has a good perception of size and relationships. Keep up the good work. As for suggestions try going to erotic images, find a pic you like and render it as a drawing. http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=704979

keennytkeennytabout 12 years ago
neck...

his neck might seem a tad long otherwise well done...

jctruckinjctruckinabout 12 years ago
jctruckin

Great rendering of body form, love the background work. Would love to see more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great job!

Composition, lines (curves, perspective), textures, all really fine. One of the best I've seen on this site. Also very sensual!

KitschshamanKitschshamanalmost 12 years ago
excellent ...

Great composition, great imagery... made me wish I'd been there. Thanks for sharing .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
mom son

i wish if they are mother and son, making love

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Excellent work!

I have been seeing some outstanding work this morning. This ranks among the best.

SinisterSpidersSinisterSpidersabout 11 years ago
Stunning

I am not an art critic so I can't comment on this except to say that it is stunning. Beautifully drawn- the subjects are full of life :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

You should note this is just a replication of an ad. This is a great version of art that already existed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More beach pictures

It is nice to see the work of talented people.

jadedlonewolf89jadedlonewolf89about 8 years ago

Nice to see an erotic picture that doesn't focus solely on sex but shows artistic value

HeyFor4HeyFor4over 6 years ago
Very Nice :)

I have always admired artists. The ability to draw is a skill that escaped me. I can create magic with words, but sketching is better left to others. Nice job!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
so very erotic

Beyond words

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The drawing I saw is very good

Very good can mean VERY good, or "yawn, it's very good, keep working at it", so for clarity it is VERY good.

Suggestion: pick a subject that isn't automatically regarded as universally beautiful .

When you make that happen YOU are wonderful.

Restless64Restless64over 5 years ago
Great Scetch

Very hot!

Tcs1956Tcs19568 months ago

This reminds of my girlfriend, Melissa R. and I on Clearwater Beach, the gulf coast of Florida.

On our blanket just after sunset, totally nude with her on top in the cowgirl position. Head thrust back and her chest thrust upward, showing off her beautiful body! We could see a couple on the hotel balcony just above us making no pretense of watching us! They were having about as much fun as we were.

A couple walking the beach strolled by past our feet and circled us as they watched us fucking. Melissa even massaged her breasts and tweaked her nipples for them. I heard the woman say to him “Absolutely not! Not in your wildest dreams!” When they walked off an older man walked right up beside us and jerked off!

I came in Melissa’s pussy about that same time! When I finished, Melissa leaned over and sucked my cock clean. The she stood up and planted her cum filled pussy over my mouth and rode my face till she orgasmed and forced fed me all my sweet cum. She stood up, still totally naked with her feet right beside my shoulders. Still on my back, I raised up, propped up on my elbows, with my face about 6 inches from her bald pussy. Melissa barked “Oh hell no! You’re not getting up yet! Open wide!”

Expecting to eat her pussy again, I did as I was told. Melissa squatted down, grabbed my head with both hands and proceeded to fill my mouth with her very warm piss! Caught off guard, it was either swallow or drown! I swallowed… several mouths full! We heard someone on the hotel balcony clapping! We grabbed our wet, sand filled blanket and ran back to my car, still naked! Melissa sucked me off as we road through downtown Clearwater in the bright lights of downtown, both still totally nude.

Thanks for the reminder! Now try to draw that scenario!

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