I love them both part 1 and part 2 plase keep going i can not wait to see the girls do next!!
I'm liking these (although a little longer might be nice, allowing for more details and such). For one of the next ones, it occurred to me how busy and crowded the bathing area was described as being would be a perfect reason for another student--classmate? upperclassman? resident assistant?--to have heard Amber calling out Chrissy's name.
Just a thought. *smile*
Love this series! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Not so much longer for longer sake. Just fill in more details of the setting, inner feelings, and bring us right into the scene with Amber and Crissy. Well done.
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