A nice little story, and the only obvious clanger was the change from shorts to a short skirt without a mention. Not a big distraction, but an obvious one
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Anonymous08/21/12
Uh Huh.
Uh Huh, they don't run out of hot water in a four star hotel! Tch, tch!
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Anonymous11/30/14
VERY GOOD
LOOKS LIKE THE GOOD DOCTOR IS WELL TAKEN CARE OF AND WILL BE FOR A LONG TIME. 5 STARS. I ENJOYED READING THE STORY AGAIN
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Neat Little Story
A nice little story, and the only obvious clanger was the change from shorts to a short skirt without a mention. Not a big distraction, but an obvious one
Uh Huh.
Uh Huh, they don't run out of hot water in a four star hotel! Tch, tch!
VERY GOOD
LOOKS LIKE THE GOOD DOCTOR IS WELL TAKEN CARE OF AND WILL BE FOR A LONG TIME. 5 STARS. I ENJOYED READING THE STORY AGAIN
RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
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