All Comments on 'Truth Or Dare'

Good short story! I see that you are a new story writer and like your writing style. I always wondered if people who write these stories do it strictly from their head or from any type of previous experience. I once had a "kissing cousin" whom I am sure (at the time) wanted to up the odds, but alas, we never got the opportunity. I will be looking for more of your works. Good job!

it was interesting but it brought a whole new meaning to "cut to the chase". It's a nice start for a new writer I've read worse. My advice is streatch things out have fun and build up the characters a bit.

Would be pretty tough to have some buttsex without any kind of lubrication.

as others commented, you could have taken more time and built up the tension, but I enjoyed the playfulness between them.

welcome to the ranks if Lit writers!

DO NOT STOP HERE......Need Chapter 2

Excellent story

could have used some more back ground more about when they were younger.

don't write about a game like truth or dare if you don't know how to play it which you obviously don't. when you play the game the person HAS to say truth or dare BEFORE being asked a question or given a dare not after. delete this and the followup and rewrite them and do it properly. always make sure you know what you are talking about before writing it. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.

Obviously we used to play differently to you. Sorry that it seems to upset you so much.

how can you play truth or dare by asking the question first? i can see it now question " TAKE YOUR TOP OFF AND RUN AROUND THE ROOM" how can you answer truth OR dare to that? you have to ask truth or dare first do a rewrite and do it right or not at all.

Truth or Dare is a pretty flexible game. I like the idea of asking the truth so the person has to decide if they want to answer the truth or do a dare.

Plus I liked it.

Who cares whether you ask the question first or not. This was just a good way to get two people to do it. In any case T or D is usually done with more than two people. Nice fun story.

Can I fuck her

Could have been more tension in the story and most people play truth or dare where they dare the other person to do something or tell the truth. Not ask a question and the person says truth...yes or I want to suck your cock. You had it backwards!

Your ToD made no goddamn sense.