Mommy Takes Me to the Doctor

Pretty wild

This story is so over the top, but it was very entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Need more

Make the mommy pregnant with Brian's baby...then make Bethany pregnant..

TOO GOOD ...

Bravo!!!!

Loved it,please more!!!

MORE MORE MORE

this stoy must go on

please more

I know you say this is the end but please more. I like the other comments like make both females pregnant and brian starts living with both of them. they work and he just has them something anything just more please.

Good story but...

Your time line doesn't seem to match up concerning to her cup size it was a ddd when she had the baby but a ee at 17 but you said she had the baby at 18. # just saying.

PLEASE MORE IT HAS POTENTIAL FOR MORE

It was amazing... It has potential for more... Like does Bethany have the same condition? And he can still fuck the Busty nurse and Bethanys mom... And even bring in a younger sister to Bethany or even bring in an aunt who has same condition or problem with her son and they both can fuck all of them... Just suggestions but this story is great and it would be great if the story went on it has alot of potential...

Pity there is no more to cum!

Brian never got to gush in Bethany's mums pussy!
The receptionist never got in on the action either.
They could have both got upsized too.
Very enjoyable read anyway.

more, but clean it up

good story line, just need to pay more attention to the details, add the scenes with the Doctor getting fucked with her daughter, some anal along the way too. get them married and have all 3 living together and getting pregnant would be good too.

great story

please could you can on writing more for this story , you have made my wife and i very horny reading it , great work, please continue to write

*****

Never read any of your submissions before, that's definitely my loss! They're awesome, full of all my favourite themes - huge tits, hot sexy Moms who love being hard fucked by their boys and so on. I love the almost cartoon-like qualities that you introduce in your stories, brings an additional dimension to my enjoyment of your stories.

HOT DAMN

PLS WRITE MORE ABOUT THIS :-D

Dripping

You have the art. One of the best stories I have ever read. The build up. The nurse casually jerking him off and the conversation going. Her innocent questions. Good.

a really fun story!

This is a very clever, really fun story! It's great that the mother has such an impressive rack and lets her boy Brian enjoy it to his heart's content. It's even greater that his mommy opens up her twat to her darling baby boy, the way ALL mommies should! Incidentally, it's a fine touch that Brian keeps calling his mother "mommy"---it just underscores their relationship, the closest there is. Brian's something else, a boy with a huge prick and a pair of hot young balls to match, who's always hard, especially for his beloved mommy. Brian spreads what he's got in those big balls of his all around the place, up every twat within reach. Time for Brian to fuck babies up all those twats, starting with his own mother's. His girls'll all have dripping cunts and his boys great big pricks and constantly loaded balls.

We like Mommy

This is such a great story. Brian is so fortunate to have a mom who will jack him off so often. It has to be a nice stress reliever for young boy with so much jizm.

Gushing

I never read the other stories in this series but I will now!!! PLEASE keep writing! I am absolutely gushing into my panties!

More!!!

More, More, More, must have more PLEASE!!! I don't think I'm alone when I say we need more of this story... I REALLY hope to read more soon...

Awesome.

Completely unrealistic, but a lot of fun. It was like Alice in Wonderland, haha. Don't stop writing, and please make another epilogue to this,

Mommy????

What 18yo calls his mother "Mommy"? That's the real mental problem.

Sequel, Please!

Very well written! Not a "boob man", per se', but still quite enjoyable. May be next time the two "mommies" can enjoy each other, too.

grade A++ jerk off material....fantasy should always be bigger than life! well done! more please.

great story

to the person who asked what 18 yr old calls his mom "mommy", did you not read what the writer said at the beginning-that he/she writes about incest, huge tits and COMPLETELY UNREALISTIC situations? it's fantasy shit, plain and simple!

Your story kept me stiff the whole time I read it.Good Job!!

yeah, hot story, hot fantasy.

Its a great story. Hot and immediate. Just what the doctor ordered.
To the person who asked who calls his mom "mommy"...., answer =
people who read incest stories. Simple.

very hot

that was one hot story. keep it up

Too much is never enough

Of course it was over the top, but it was great! Write more!!

love it

Im so gonna masturbate everytime reading this story

Unusual and Great -Funny too.

Quite an imagination and humorous. Very well done with great writing.

Five stars

Over the top fun. Loved it!

POV and potential

It irks me a bit that the perspective of the story is suddenly switched from the first person perspective of the son to suddenly being in the third person. It tends to be better to keep to one voice all the way through, and there was no reason to switch voices since the third person did not give us more information.

Speaking of more, the actual sex scenes could have been given more detail. Granted the story has a decent length and does have plenty to masturbate to, but it's more based on the numbers of time the sex is had than the quality and detail of the actual sex between the characters.

I'm cumming

Every time I read this fabulous story I cum with them. Wish there was more about cumming on their tits.

great!

It seemed like Kurt Vonnegut tooted crank while eating his wife and she was reading Penthouse Letters aloud! apologies to Kurt for misspell.

Ha!

Love that last comment, Anon. Thanks. :)

Overdue sequel

Let's see it Taco, fantastic start so let's get to the no doubt explosive sequel already.

Thanks and update!

Thanks again for all the great feedback. No more of this story planned (tho I may revisit it in the future), but I've got a final chapter of Mommy Made for Me pending, so keep an eye out for that! It's by far the longest, most complicated chapter, so please read and vote it up!

This one's sooooooooooo....

..... outlandishly crazy, that's it's both funny and erotic at the same time... i kept wanting to stop reading because it just kept getting weirder by the paragraph but, i was so curious to know how it was going to end, i just stayed with it. i'm not a boob type person myself but, it kept bringing to mind those 3D comic women with the over-sized chest protectors. very entertaining read.

Dr mom and son do sexual healing

" Mommy takes me to the Dr" Excellent story of clinical coming in moms needy sperm sucking sons welcome cum. Nursing on mom is always the best. Suckling her large jutting nipples makes her feel so much love and affection. The application of the vaginal ointment facilitated the smooth entry into mothers wanton incestuous sucking sperm hole. The boy experienced the superb viselike grip of mothers cunt.

Yes yes yes

That was amazing I feel in the same position as brian :s

this story is a train wreck

And I can't stop reading it.

Over the top doesn't begin to cover it!

Every time I read this story, (and I read it often;) I can't help but think, "This story is absolutely fucking ridiculous". Then I come. :-D I love it. I some times read it 'anonymous' just so I can give it 5 stars again. The only thing I'd wish you'd explore is more with Bethenny and Brian getting into the sibling bit with Ms. Pepper as Mommy.
Please write more of these kind of "absolutely fucking ridiculous" stories. ("Mommy made for me" is great too.)

What the hell is this?

And can you do it again, I loved it.

Get an editor.

First you make a point of emphasizing that the mother is not married and is to be called Ms., but you shift to calling her Mrs. Also, you seem to be mathematically challenged. Mom is 36, son is 18. Mom became pregnant at 16? Also, how did Bethany age backwards? She started off at 22, then became 19...

I read this in the wee hours of the morning when I should have been sleeping and I had to come back to it this morning just to see if it really was what I thought I'd read a few hours ago. And it was.

Now I'm thinking it might be fun to visit this world for a few hours..... Strictly as an observer, of course..... And without any liquid or pharmaceutical aids...... I won't even bring my camera......

cartoonish, YES!!!

realistic, not!!!

so outlandish it is no longer humourous.

Retarded

Reads like the ramblings of a middle-school moron.

funny as hell

I hope you planned this story as a comedy because it was funny as hell

If you didn't write a comedy you missed your calling

Fun read

When is there a Drs office around like that when you need one.

totally unbelievable

I'm sorry, but this story is totally unbelievable, the story line is weak, the characters laughable, the sheer massiveness of the tits is unrealistic, not to mention that a career woman could be that naive and turn into a brainless bimbo in 2 seconds is a boner killer.

whatever it was I had my hand on my cock the whole time wishing I could taste him and her and her. I would eat his cum from mommy while he fucked the girl then eat his cum from her as he went back to mommy or perhaps he would fuck me as I ate his cum from them. I would love to suck his cock and take his load as I whimpered like a sissy cum slut.

This hentai logic doe

I couldn't even picture this at all lol.