Incest Neighborhood Ch. 03

Erin

Maybe your good friend Erin Fox can help with the editing of your stories. The third paragraph should read as Sharon's not Wendy's father or should it be Wendy's husband? Good story otherwise.

Unconvincing

The transition between mother & daughter to incestuous relationship lacked all credibility. You need to read to read highly rated incest stories on this site to see how such scenes are well realised. Incest between close relations particularly between parent and offspring, do not suddenly happen at the drop of a hat. Such tabboo barriers need to be broken in a convincing manner for an incest story to work.

Story description

It says Karen and Wendy, not Sharon and Wendy...just an FYI!

Thanks

I will go through the story and make some edits - thanks for those who noticed, the lack of my regular computer, sigh ...

Suggesting that I go and read OTHER writers is a total waste of time. I would no more write like another author than Steven King would write like T.S. Elliot. I've written several mother-daughter stories out here and have over 100 high-rated stories to my credit. If this one didn't appeal to a reader, fine ... but I'm not changing my style to suit anyone.

Thanks for reading

BrettJ

Very enjoyable and hot story. Could do with some more of this story as mother and daughter steadily fuck their slutty way through an international line up of big cock - black next?