First She Showed Me

Quality

Love and lust. Beautiful!

A most perfect story.

Thank you for giving us this beauty.

Wow

Nicely written, dialog is hard to do. Very tastefully executed, most of the sex was left to the reader's imagination which makes it even harder to write. You got my five.

Woman

Some stories are ment to be told and you did a great job of telling

Superb.

I particularly enjoyed the way they spoke to each other.

Wonderful.

Thank You.

One of the Best

I have read a lot of stories on here... This is one of the Best I have read.. While the sexual content is low.. this is one of the most sexual and thought provoking stories I've read..

Great Story

You did a wonderful job on this story, Thanks for your time and effort.

Wonderful

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. You made me feel like i became part of the story. You let your readers imagination run wild. Please wright some more.

Nice

Nice

Unique, beautiful and touching. So very pleased that there are writers out there that can still write like this. Thank you.

I agree -

Nice - Sweet

Good

Kept me interested good one

Very well done

Loving and erotic along with being a very sweet love story.

It's good to read about two people who find complete love with each other.

Thanks for the good story

This was a great story

Well written, not just "fucking with words" but actual literature. Big difference. Character development, motive, dialogue, etc all good.

Simply one of the best

Scaramouche123, congratulations on one of the absolute best stories ever posted on Literotica. Not only did you provide wonderful, in-depth character development, you made it seem so real. No "get right to the sex," unlike so many stories about brother-sister couplings. Solly and Louis are believable characters. The way their love for each other was consummated is so very believable. I don't know if you are going to add more chapters (I wish you would,) but your creativity and imagination deserve to continue this story. For the record, you didn't make a single grammatical or spelling error. Bravo!!

Compelling reading

Just kept me glued to it to the end, once I got over the first sentence. It wasn't the parents who were orphans! Sorry to be picky, but I nearly gave up before I'd hardly started.

I liked it.

This was a really good story. I really enjoyed it.

Orphaned parents

The parents were orphans that is the reason our protagonists are alone with only each other for familial support.
Ok now for the comment on the piece... Simply stunning.

Fabulous Story

Well written and absolutly marvelous piece. Thanks

Absolutely fantastic

Your story was simply one of the best stories I have read on Literotica in a long time. Your words flowed as you are very gifted.

Great job.

Really, really sweet!

Loved the story, a real feeling story with more than just sex, I have to check on your other submissions to see if they are all this good!

Fantastic!

Talented writer, i must say! Well done!

tks for the story.

An absolutely stunning, beautiful work

I couldn't get off to this, I guess it's like medieval art, you don't jack off to it, it deserves more than that. you admire the art.

The story was extremely well structured, the ending proved beautiful, something that made me go "Damn!" in awe.

Very erotic, covering feelings perfectly, in the end wonderful art in my opinion.

I've never read a piece this well done.

a most delightful story

a piece of art..

AMAZING!

This is absolutely the very best I have ever read in Literotica, and I have read a lot of very good writing here. This story is indeed a fine work of art.

Fantastic!

A wonderful, artfully crafted, Love story!

A bit weird, but in a nice way. It's hard to imagine two people as screwed up as these; but able to function snd show love.

Absolutely delightful

You dear writer, have a gift. A way of providing imagery through words, but even beyond that, you have a way of introducing a whimsical, dreamy sense to the story that I found wonderful. So very well written! Thank you.

THATS GOOD

I KNOW HOW IT FEEL WHEN UR OWN BROTHER FILLING UR PUSSY WITH HIS SEED......M HAVING SEX WITH MY YOUNGER BROTHER FROM LAST 1 YEAR....DID ALL POSITIONS.....USED EVERYING WHILE FUCKING LIKE HONEY,JAM,WHIPPED CREAM ETC....ITS FEELS AMAZING WHEN HONEY FLOWING IN UR PUSSY WITH HIS DICK AND CUM.....HHHMMMM.....AFTER 5 MONTHS FROM NOW M GONNA GIVE BIRTH TO HIS FIRST CHILD.....DO HAVE SEX WITH YOUR BROTHER ITS AMAZING......TRUST ME ITS TRUE......

good

not believable but believable.

Too verbose

Decent, but the endless dialogue could be cut in half and still be effective.