All Comments on 'First She Showed Me'

Love and lust. Beautiful!

Thank you for giving us this beauty.

Nicely written, dialog is hard to do. Very tastefully executed, most of the sex was left to the reader's imagination which makes it even harder to write. You got my five.

Some stories are ment to be told and you did a great job of telling

I particularly enjoyed the way they spoke to each other.

Wonderful.

Thank You.

I have read a lot of stories on here... This is one of the Best I have read.. While the sexual content is low.. this is one of the most sexual and thought provoking stories I've read..

You did a wonderful job on this story, Thanks for your time and effort.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. You made me feel like i became part of the story. You let your readers imagination run wild. Please wright some more.

Nice

Unique, beautiful and touching. So very pleased that there are writers out there that can still write like this. Thank you.

Nice - Sweet

Kept me interested good one

Loving and erotic along with being a very sweet love story.

It's good to read about two people who find complete love with each other.

Thanks for the good story

Well written, not just "fucking with words" but actual literature. Big difference. Character development, motive, dialogue, etc all good.

Scaramouche123, congratulations on one of the absolute best stories ever posted on Literotica. Not only did you provide wonderful, in-depth character development, you made it seem so real. No "get right to the sex," unlike so many stories about brother-sister couplings. Solly and Louis are believable characters. The way their love for each other was consummated is so very believable. I don't know if you are going to add more chapters (I wish you would,) but your creativity and imagination deserve to continue this story. For the record, you didn't make a single grammatical or spelling error. Bravo!!

Just kept me glued to it to the end, once I got over the first sentence. It wasn't the parents who were orphans! Sorry to be picky, but I nearly gave up before I'd hardly started.

This was a really good story. I really enjoyed it.

The parents were orphans that is the reason our protagonists are alone with only each other for familial support.

Ok now for the comment on the piece... Simply stunning.

Well written and absolutly marvelous piece. Thanks

Your story was simply one of the best stories I have read on Literotica in a long time. Your words flowed as you are very gifted.

Great job.

Loved the story, a real feeling story with more than just sex, I have to check on your other submissions to see if they are all this good!

Talented writer, i must say! Well done!

tks for the story.

I couldn't get off to this, I guess it's like medieval art, you don't jack off to it, it deserves more than that. you admire the art.

The story was extremely well structured, the ending proved beautiful, something that made me go "Damn!" in awe.

Very erotic, covering feelings perfectly, in the end wonderful art in my opinion.

I've never read a piece this well done.

a piece of art..

This is absolutely the very best I have ever read in Literotica, and I have read a lot of very good writing here. This story is indeed a fine work of art.

A wonderful, artfully crafted, Love story!

A bit weird, but in a nice way. It's hard to imagine two people as screwed up as these; but able to function snd show love.

You dear writer, have a gift. A way of providing imagery through words, but even beyond that, you have a way of introducing a whimsical, dreamy sense to the story that I found wonderful. So very well written! Thank you.

I KNOW HOW IT FEEL WHEN UR OWN BROTHER FILLING UR PUSSY WITH HIS SEED......M HAVING SEX WITH MY YOUNGER BROTHER FROM LAST 1 YEAR....DID ALL POSITIONS.....USED EVERYING WHILE FUCKING LIKE HONEY,JAM,WHIPPED CREAM ETC....ITS FEELS AMAZING WHEN HONEY FLOWING IN UR PUSSY WITH HIS DICK AND CUM.....HHHMMMM.....AFTER 5 MONTHS FROM NOW M GONNA GIVE BIRTH TO HIS FIRST CHILD.....DO HAVE SEX WITH YOUR BROTHER ITS AMAZING......TRUST ME ITS TRUE......

not believable but believable.

Decent, but the endless dialogue could be cut in half and still be effective.

Very sweet, gentle and touching.

Well worth 5 Stars !

This is an extremely touching and amazing story

I can appreciate the feelings you so greatly captured. Gals late in my life call me 'the dirty old romantic.'

Well, that was amazingly wonderful.

Well presented and felt like I was in the room with them.

The conversations, although good, were somewhat difficult to follow (as in who said, that line)...which interrupted the flow that you had previously created.

Even so, dare I say it?....

This is the best love story I've read ❤️ on Literotica.

😊😊🙏🙏😊😊

Gave you a well deserved 5* as that was the only maximum to give you.

Will now look for your other stories....😊🙏😊

shove a stick up their asses yes, but that's NOT fucking...it's a stick not a dick.

Very well done.

Beautiful story.