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by Cuntrygyrl

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Here we go, another punctuation alert.

Interogatives and the only mark is a single period at the end. Detracts from a decent piece.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
New moon.

Time will heal the hurt ~ I'm waiting patiently for that day.

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