Getting to You Ch. 02

PLease, Oh Please this is great

Please update soon this is really fantastic story

more please

I scroll down to see if it's mote than one page and then ....

I read about two sentances per day... Lol just to make it last thr much longer.
Please update soon... More more more

I like the story but, I just wished you were able to update quicker or have more than one pages.

Update soon please!

I can't wait for more, this is getting interesting by the minute

*****

Five.

great

nice update, waiting for more please

AWWW, COME ON,PLEASE!

Yes

loved it.

Longer submissions, please...

Otherwise, an excellent start.

What a tease!

Damn, I was sitting down in my comfy chair with a blanket and snacks only to see it was one page, and not a long one at that. Again...damn! *sighs* It was still good though, so I'm still happy and waiting to see what's up with this Zak. I'm down for a distraction so long as it leads right back to Jason; I'm already too invested in Jason/Gabby to want anyone else for her. Thanks for the update -Mel

Keep going

cute story...

more please.

GREAT FAN!!!

REAL GOOD BEGINNING AND MIDDLE. PLEASE CONTINUE.

Gabby, open your almond shaped eyes!!!

i'm kind of annoyed with the cliche character that doesn't realize how much the person of desire really cares for them. it should be more than obvious that he is very considerate of her. this over the top pessimism can be a little annoying. i'm just a little bit vexed by Gabby, but I still like the story.

Go Ahead...

And get what is yours as you are able to relate to the truth that is before you always.

awwww......

update soon!
I hate it when good stories arent finished.

Such tenderonis...both of them

Grown ass folks would have known to do with all that heat.
Friendship is the best way to start any relationship. You get to know and understand one another. Then you both can
make "informed" decisions as to the level you may want to take things. Sometimes it gets fucked up and then there's no going back. I guess it depends on the circumstances around the next step. No drunk fucking............can suck later.
Please make these two make a good decision for the next chapter.

this is good

are you planning to finish it anytime soon?

seems like a good story line and the writing is very good. I will keep checking for updates...for a while.

Great Story...

Happy Holidays!!! OMG, I love this story so freakin much. Please update soon. I'm always checking to see if there is an update. Jason and Gabby, I cannot wait for more of them.

:D

I'm sure you've probably forgotten about this site, I've read these two chapters about 3 times ( within a far time span), it's so good I can't get enough of it, I wish you could continue. :D

Ever thought of finishing the story?

'.'

This is so good

please come back with more chapters soon...

Really dude it was just starting to get good

Bummer

You never plan on finishing this story right? :( didn't think so. it's been three years since your last entry. Another unfinished story

Please

Please oh please tell me the rest will be here soon. I like this a lot. Waiting

Such a great start! It's been so long but I hope u come back to this one.