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Keep it Up

It isn't the best out of your stories that I have read so far, but it's good. I would have liked to get a little more reaction from Megan. From reading the story I got the impression that she sort of just laid their and let the other two fuck her. The last sentence of your story, about listening to songs on her stereo, seems highly out of place. You don't really need that line. At least not unless of course you are planning on adding more, then, in which case, I would elaborate on it all. Could use a few more descriptions too, like what Megan's pussy looked like and so forth. Overall though, not bad. I liked it. Keep it up.

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