All Comments on 'Neighborhood Mom at July 4th Party Ch. 01'

by bronston22

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stargazer_bardstargazer_bardalmost 13 years ago
nothing more than rape

You got this posted in the wrong category, it should be in non-consent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Started good.....

and then you ruined it with the rape. And that is all it was!

Could have been a really hot story with her being a wanting and willing participant

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Disappointed

I do not condone rape. I enjoy sex as well as the next person. The story was proceeding well without the rape angle. Too bad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Same old shit from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
agree w/comments

Went from hot and hard to down and disgusted w/ rape.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Penny and Pound

In for a penny, in for a pound as the old saying goes. Nc/reluctant is my favorite genre and looking forward to Dianne getting it again from this asshole. Hopefully a nosy old neighbor or one of her male associates discovers the facts and gets her for himself as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Go to jail. Straight to jail. Do not pass go.

Rape. Rape. Rape. Pure & simple you sick SOB.

papagrizpapagrizalmost 13 years ago
YOU ARE A SICK WRITER

and had I known the outcome I would never have read the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good way to fuck a tease

Your story ended with the only way it could've. A drunken cock tease who needed a different cock up her cunt. Good job bronston22

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Love it....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hate it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Check your Math

" middle-aged " 24 year old with a teen age son ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Next steps

I liked the idea but you could develop it by having him had recorded the fuck on his phone and he uses this to get himself able to have Dianne when and where he wants it if she does not want her husband to see the video / pictures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story!

I hope you continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Rape

Rape

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

Hope you continue......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue

Really enjoyed this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wrong category

This should be filed under non-consent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Part 2?

I know its been years but man im sure we'd love a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was rape, no question about it. Her husband should confront the guy, cut his dick off and shove the whole 8" up his ass. And this writer should suffer the same fate, but he probably only has 2"... f*cking as*hole. 1/5

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