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by Anonymous

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by 12/30/03

I can't believe .....

I'm the first to comment. I really loved this minimalist approach to the English language as heard by the foreign ear.

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by Anonymous02/16/06

I agree...

with Tris, Senna. I've had many Polish friends before, and from the sound of their language I find it amazing when they master English. Tho from the sounds of Polish you'd think it wouls be easier! Nice work here; very short and meaningful. Thanks,

Boo

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by Anonymous08/24/06

English!

I'm teaching ESL this term. I may read this poem to my students. (so many poems of yours to read!) Thank you. C.o.S.

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