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Trying the 'Permission Slip' Game

byGrey Eagle 286©
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by Anonymous

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by betrayedbylove11/30/12

To The Last Anon

I wish you had a name. Read my bio, then ask me the question.

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by tazz31711/30/12

I THINK THEY HAD BOTH BETTER THINK

and sans proof short of mindblowing...Who knows. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous12/07/12

Assuming

Assuming he really loved her then I give him cudo's, credit and best wishes.

She went from reading the other story, to thinking about it, got hubby to read it and then thought she would get him to give her a pass.

I think he figured it all out when he realized she coaxed him to read the story, had time to think, reflect on her slight changes of character and then - hoped she wouldn't go further.

Unfortunately, she had already decided to have a fling, a tryst or two, he realized it and was sadly ready.

Too bad, we know he liked being married to her.

Thanks!!

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by Anonymous12/30/12

Betrayed

I did read your bio; you are still an idiot! Thinking about someone other than your spouse is not cheating! Actions not thoughts can be cheating. So your wife cheated on you (that was an action not thought) join the club. Grow up! You never fantisized about a movie star? That doesn't mean you cheated.

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by cantbuymy12/30/12

grey you did good. hubby said no in a way that was really NO! bitch wanted to cheat and the next step was her doing it where he did not know about it and could not say no. well done! 5

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by Drbeamer333303/09/13

Loved it

Very definitive in his response. No hesitation.

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by Anonymous03/24/13

Agree with Anonymous 'Assuming"

Sad that he was happily married to her, life was good, he was happy and content.

My point, aside from 'Assuming' is the degree of difficulty it took for him to give her a short and disappointed dissertation and leave. I know he was hurting but any intelligent man would realize that it was better to leave immediately than to try and get through this - the thoughts, visions and memories would destroy him. Better to leave before he had to witness or just know she was with someone else, separated and divorced wouldn't make it better but he could at least begin to heal and eventually see other women.

Long winded wasn't I. THANKS!!

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by Rhomanov05/27/13

Sssssssssssssssssssssssss

BOOM!


Nicely done.

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by Anonymous07/20/13

Nice Story

A good effort; far superior to most of the cuck/wimp drivel in other's postings. Her asking for permission told him all he needed to know and he dealt with the situation accordingly like a man. Kudos!

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by Anonymous07/26/13

Too Fast

While I like the fact the husband said no and made sure she knew it., It was too fast. He went from the middle of them discussing it to one big paragraph of him going thru the cons and its consequences. And then straight to I am divorcing you. Up to that point she hadn't even been able to talk let alone respond or do anything wrong. You could tell she didn't like the idea of him with other women so she could have decided not to ever bring it up again in case he thought to go to other women.

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by EgoTrixi07/26/13

Better than the original, but...

...a bit more "story" would have been good. This story was cut too short.

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by rightbank07/30/13

I tried to follow your suggestion, but:

there are no stories on Literotica by Wolf Bennington. Any suggestions?

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by Jounar09/08/13

talk about not fucking around

Wifey getting him to read the story, her hinting at going on a 3 day meeting for a company hubby seemed felt was almost closing down and her avoiding the issue of him going with her pretty much shows she had already planed her little fuckfest.

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by fanfare11/20/13

stupidity, thy name is anonymous

Professor S. I. Hayakawa must be rotating in his grave like a water turbine at the ignorance of people who say things such as: "Threatening to cheat is the same as doing it" as they lack the capacity, heck, the competency for semantic definition.



So, that map I drew on a napkin, with a crayon, is the same thing as the actual property it roughly describes?



If i write a fairy tale does that make me a fairy?

If I write a story about a ferryboat does that make me a ferryboat?


if I write a story about ignorant trolls would that make me a commentator on this site?
Come to think of it, that would qualify as a fairy tale!



How did FinalStand put it “Standing in a Church does not make you a Good Christian, anymore than standing in a garage makes you an automobile.”

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by betrayedbylove12/16/13

Read it Again

Before my comment, I just want to say that there are very few good new stories coming out so I reread older tales. Now in response to fanfare, didn't it seem odd that she read the other tale about getting permission for an affair and then suggested it to her husband? Also, she must have known she was his one and only. If she wanted to experiment wouldn't he want to also? I did seem to me that either she already cheated now wanted to do it out in the open or already had someone picked out for her tryst. Either way, trust is now lost. Although I can't say he made the right decision he did have a right to question whether she still loved him as much as when they first married.

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by sugna12/16/13

Rational Thinking

Finally some rational thinking not tainted by the overwrought emotions of a melodramatic character. If you are a man, if you have been working to support your family, surely the world has shit on you enough to toughen you up enough to deal with a stupid, whore of a cheating wife. Unless you are a pervert too, the very suggestion of allowing your wife to fuck around should be taken as the end of the marriage. What she is telling her husband is the she is/will fuck around and that if he doesn't agree, it will happen anyway. There is no way to verify any of it, but the total lack of respect she is showing for the marriage tells the story. Thank God there was no mention of children! The husband did the right thing, run do not walk to the nearest exit!

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by fanfare01/01/14

sigh

Sorry bebylo and sugna, but in my opinion your positions are just a mask of bluster over your unresolved adolescent feelings of inadequacy. A one dimensional fiction about one dimensional characters, the author deliberately writing this story to feed the trolls.

If this had been considered from the wife's POV, she was attempting to communicate (from the ancient arayan for two-way conversation) with her husband, Offering her fantasies, ask him for his and then see what overlapped. That both of them together might or might not care to try out. But that would be reality and therefore outside the purview of the LW genre.

Perhaps I'm wrong, that has to be true sooner or later. Judging from the general quality of GE286's submissions, I am guessing this was a quickie. Dashed off at a whim, without much effort. Just for the enjoyment of writing a piece that is aimed to galvanize a pavlovian response among the BTB lynch-mob.

Congratulations GE286, you achieved your apparent goal.

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by Ducky702/04/14

Well that was right to the point

He used a fresh sharp razor to cut to the chase of her request.

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by Anonymous03/12/14

Good Story

That was a good story. Very quick and to the point but it really needs a chapter 2. Thanks.

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by Anonymous04/05/14

l like...

but I would really like another chapter

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by tazz31704/05/14

ASK AND YOU SHALL RECEIVE

just not what you thought it would be, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by xtchr07/14/14

Very Interesting!

This is a story that readers can take different ways. As I read the story, I inferred that the wife was already cheating or planning on cheating on her 3 day "business trip". She was vague about the trip because she didn't want hubby along. What company sends an employee to a training seminar with only 1 or 2 weeks notice? Doesn't happen. This is not a sudden customer problem or a possible rushed sales call, it is a training seminar.
The wife was trying to lead the husband into giving her his permission to cheat. Someone wrote a comment that she was just communicating. I think she was manipulating him to get what she wanted.
If hubby agreed, she would cheat, if hubby said no, she would still cheat, just hide it.
For some reason she was not happy with hubby. He would have even more heartache down the road.
He acted in the only way possible for a man with any self-respect, he ended the marriage. He may have loved her, but she really didn't love or respect him.
One of the reason the story is short, is the wife wanted something that he couldn't give her. Instead a playing pages and pages of games, he did the smart thing and said goodbye. Well Done!

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by betrayedbylove07/20/14

@fanfare

In reference to your comment from 01/01/14, I believe it is you that has the thought patterns of an adolescent. You try too hard to make your point, like a thirteen year old boy who is always the last one picked to play but he has to play otherwise he takes his ball and goes home. My comment and sugna's comment were real interpretations of the tale, not a knock against other commenters. You want adolescent, I'll give it to you.
Go fuck your mother.
That is about your level.
I have spoken.
HA

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by tazz31707/20/14

WEEP NO MORE MY LADY

the spilt milk was all your fault, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/19/15

"Did he burn down the house when she said...

...she wanted a "bigger" one? How stupid."

Nope. Nor did he cut off his own cock. What's that got to do with anything?

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by Anonymous03/13/15

OUCH!

Not sure about this one. He seemed to have everything planned out and ready to go to the divorce attorney. Why? Did he have information we didn't have about his wife's activities? And was she a lot older than he was? I mean it sounded like she had been married before, had lovers previous to her 1st marriage and that he came into their marriage a virgin. Seems odd to say the least. And now she wants to talk about a story they've both read and he goes ballistic? That made no sense. I feel like a lot of information is missing from this blurb. It just felt like an over-the-top reaction to a discussion. Didn't like this one.

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by steven85705/14/15

good story

The story is short but gets cuts to the heart of the matter. She wants a and to provide for her and allow her to get what she wants on the side. He dumped her a little fast, but the marriage was over the minute she asked for some on the side.

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by virtualatheist05/22/15

A beginning...

of a story, but very little else. I would love to see a chapter two dealing with the consequences of this conversation.

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by Anonymous02/26/16

that was fast

more like rushed.

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by nancyharpman1703/08/16

A Short But Complete Story

5-Stars.

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by TornadoTys04/27/16

Good Start

Is thete a chapter 2 ! ?

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by Darkmagnet07/22/16

He's right, it's already over.

This sums it up perfectly and with true accuracy. The fact that she thinks she needs to try a different cock, means she has already decided that her husband does not do it for her anymore. If she were to be honest, she already knows what different cocks would be like. If I counted correctly, she had at least three men before her husband. If she's asking for permission, actually hoping he will let her have her fantasy and fling, their marriage is over anyway. Dump her.

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by Anonymous07/30/16

quick and to point

Husband was correct in assessment. Why draw it out?
He would end up like the 3rd husband of serial cheating wife on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com
Black widow tattoo on her left upper back says it all. Her marriage vows are as genuine as her implanted 36C breasts

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by DrSemblance08/23/16

I do not at all think "it is already over"

People read stories, have fantasies and discuss them with their lover.

This what people do in a healthy sexual partnership.

He found a way to emphatically show not only his disapproval but the reasons why and the consequences.

There is no reason at all that a loving relationship cannot continue.

The only way it would not, is if the fantasy consumes her and she cheats.

But, that is not a certainty.

Married couples live with unfulfilled fantasies all the time without adversely affecting the relationship. Just because 2 marry, does not mean they MUST try everything. It is about respecting boundaries and her fucking other people is obviously one of his hard limits.

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by Anonymous09/15/16

I Agree

With Darkmagnet

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by Anonymous09/15/16

What?

There's no story here. No emotion, no nothing. He doesn't like what she appears to propose, and he just gets up an leaves, apparently forever. That's a story? They apparently didn't have much of a relationship anyway, so what's the point?

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by Anonymous09/27/16

agree

The fact she even brought it up means the marriage is dying or dead.
She want permission so she can keep her meal ticket.
People in love and comitted to each other dont plan out and propose cheating.
This isnt a "lifestyle" thats healthy.

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