by MyZenTrail
you have some good lines. Like the hackling playful dolphins bit.
Such a juicy read, thanks for sharing. Good to see your writings again! :)
Lots of great playful imagery combined with sweet sentiments. I'm a sucker for both of those. The dolphins line for me got kind of muddled both because of the double simile (my small brain can only take so much!), and because it just felt weird when I said "endorphins, like hackling playful dolphins". But such quibbles could not stop my five!