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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/11

awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great story!

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by Anonymous10/07/11

Hot

It was a great story and i hope u post the next chapter very very soon! I would love it if u story would be a bit longer! great writting and a really good idea! see u soon

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by Ferrumitzal12/03/11

Very nice. I can see this going in a fun direction, and especially like that the changes he makes don't seem to evaporate after awhile.

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by zena9912/10/11

Promising Start

So far so good. I am looking to see where this tale takes us.

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