Hostile Ch. 10

Finally .

The End?!

Another ship was crashing. Who was on it? How many? Were they hostile? Were there many people? Were they humanoid? Did the crash attract any unexpected inhabitants of the planet? You can't just end it there, because you're tired of writing. It's cruel.

I have to say that for a story that I have likes so much it is a shame to have it end the way it has. It is almost like you are tired of writing it and decided to hit the writing gas pedal, skip over so much material and then end it on a cliff hangar. I am very sorry to see such a great story end very badly. I have a feeling you are going to get a lot of comments such as this one from people who have been on edge each time for a new chapter to come out. I kind of feel cheated.

About the ending.

I did not really care for the ending. If you are just tired of this story or done writing on this site I do however thank you for at least ending this story instead of leaving us forever waiting. On the other hand I hope you just wrapped this chapter up to start on the next generation/story line. Which ever you did I would like to thank you for the story.

What ???

After waiting sooo long for chapter 10 you leave us with a cliff-hanger? You must continue this story, or at the very least, move on with a different segment. Excellent story, characters, and writing. Please continue on.

I get it

I understand why you ended the story here. I hope you will consider a sequel to this story. Good writing.

A regular Bermuda-Planet you got there ;)

Nice Story!