All Comments on 'Stepmom to Be?'

by Anonnymous

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
CONTINUE!

It's just that simple! Well-written stories are always welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Get an Editor!

Your story would be quite good if you got some advice from an experienced Editor.

And did some proof-reading.

And checked that you were using the correct spelling of the word for the context!

E.g. "Leslie looks up at DJ passed his spent cock ".

The spelling in this context would be 'past', NOT 'passed'!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
I hope that the young man turns the tables on her

And she becomes the submissive partner to the young man. That he turns her into his private little sex toy and cum slut.

I would love to see more of this good beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I hope there's none coming.

I stop reading after the 3rd paragraph. Maybe writing is just not your thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
No more ..!!!

No more of this story as she pulled his "Cock" off and now he is a 'Pussy..!!* LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
How I wish that was me

I just so want to be that boy!! Getting every mans wish come true!! A woman that wants him all the time!! Enthralled and want lots more!!

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 7 years ago
Do you really intend to continue?

Good start to a hot story but you said to be continued and you haven't

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

PLEASE,do not continue this shrivel.

1 star, quit reading 1/3 way thru.

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