A New Living Situation Ch. 03

hmm

got a little odd atthe end there but great story

Whoa... Love it

Love it. I just hope Alex's sense of ownership is because he is starting to fell something for her. I like him but that would change with one read if he turns out to be a sick freak.

Ruht Ro, George

Yeah......probably not the best move to call your "sexual employer" by the wrong name.
Good chapter!

*****

Five.

Interesting but missing something...

I agree it did get a little weird at the end overall it is still a good story but something is missing. If I can make a suggestion I think you should make Bella and Alex interact more than inside of the bedroom on a sexual level. I mean if she had been living there two weeks something had to change base on your writing, I mean if it was an arrangement why is he hurt all of a sudden? I think you need to expand on that a bit more.

I knew someone would get caught up.

I knew someone would get caught up I just didn't think it would be Alex. I get the feeling Bella is going to find out if Rick is a better lay or not. If she does serves Alex right. He had gotten his payment every night and there agreement was for only 4 times a months. Alex's rules not Bella's...lmao

umm

i knew someone would get caught up too. if a white man told me he wanted to own me, i think i would be put off too. actually nay men for that matter... but eh it's fiction. food read, but too short.

a new living situation

love this story keep it up and keep it coming fast thank u lol

Good stuff

Normally I dont like these short clipped stories because I want the long winded Jane Eyre type interracial romances but since i'm short on time and sleep this is exactly what I need and can handle right now. I'm liking possesive Alex and I hope it continues in that vain. Cant wait to read your other stories...

so....

I LOVE THESE STORIES....update soon..lol
I know it takes me TO LONG TO update, but now i know how my readers feel...PLEASE UPDATE SOON

cn i say absolutely great!!!!!!!!!!!!

***** n only cuz i cnt give it ten

love it

I loved it girl...I can't wait for the next chapter

Super Job !!!

I love your stories PLEASE update soon . Love it. IT was so HOT when he said " I want to own you ". Love love it . More Please !!!!

WHOA!!

I hope Alex can win her heart.

more please

more

Love it can't wait for nxt installment

update?

Are you going to finish this?

Grr.

Finish. Please.

What did I say????? Just like I said!!!!!

Men seem to forget the bio-emotional imperative. Sex is a connector for them and they try to deny it every fuckin' time. I said someone would be screaming "uncle" and sho nuff!!! You can't fuck on the regular like that and NOT form an attachment...ain't happenin' luv. 'Nuff said.

Alpha_marm you read my mind!!!

Completely agree!

Alrighty then!!! Alex is feeling a little jealous, besides Bella it ain't cool to be dating while you fucking Alex. That would be skank nasty!!!