30 Days - Episode 02

2 thumbs up

This just keeps getting better and better. Im so captivated and can't wait for what's to come and cum ;-)

awesome

cant wait fore next one really sexy stuff thnx or the good stories

Awesome!

one of the best stories I have read! PLEASE keep the chapters cuming!

Hot

I just found you and absolutely love it! Cannot wait for the next chapter. I think they should do it. Don't leave me hanging. My pussy was throbbing after I finished reading. I didn't want to cum until Brian cums in her pussy. I plan to finish at the same time so make it long and slow. Thx, JulieK

great

hot and erotic....more soon please

awesome story

This story starts off great and gets better as you read on. It's only a couple of days into their punishment which means, hopefully, a lot more erotic adventures. A well written and thought out story. Keep up the great work and please don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapters.

Awesome

Awesome when's the next chapter?

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter

Need a part 3.

Great!!! Can't wait for more!

more

I can't wait for you to come out with more! This is the hottest grounding ever

NEED MORE!!

This is terrific, I'll deff keep my eye out for episode 3!!

More

Can't wait to read more

Very good

Very good , cant what for more.

need more!

can´t wait for episode 3 (and 4?) !!
this story is sooo hot!

WOW

Zooey, I love your mind (and your photo is HOT). You're writing is great--cant stop cumming! Love ya!

A little brother/Sis playfulness + a lot of ' almost' teasing + a bit of technology used for purient purposes = ...

Winner, winner ( chickendinner) . Umm yes . Fingerlicking good ( or bad ). Thank you for charming, low key sensual read.

Is that all there is?

This isn't just about Episode 2, but about both episodes. Is that all there is? There has to be more. After all, they were boy friend and girl friend long before their parents had started dating and, eventually, were married. I would think that they still loved each other as boy friend and girl friend. So, why shouldn't they be taking this little affair a little further until the final climax, lol. No pun intended. Why not take it to the point where they become husband and wife. After all, they are not related by birth. They are only related by the fact that their parents were married to each other after their children fell in love and were boy friend and girl friend. Take the story to its final conclusion, whether they are married to each other or they are married to others. But if they truly do love each other, then, they should marry each other. End of story. Excuse me, but I have a tendency to get a little wordy at times.

more please

you should write more otherwise you leave your readers hanging

Don't leave us hanging!

You simply have to continue this story! It's just HOT and I'm wondering what happens next. Take pity on us and write some more!!

The writer was in a car wreck back in like August, she made one reply afterwards on twitter, and since then I haven't seen anything at all from her.. Hope she's okay, and will one day finish this.. Zooey we really do miss your work..

MIRxA

wow.
Awesome, mind blowing.
I love your plot and way of writing story.start was bit depresing but sotry becomes great later.but it should have detail of all 30 days as well as story of how friends of mira get that giant monster.so please write from the point you stop and complete it so that everyone can enjoy full 30 day journey and encounter with mira's friends.its my humble request so please consider it.

waiting for the next sequel.

Like both episodes. Plz post episode 3 quickly.. thank you.

great story

rest of 30 days wanted ASAP

Amazing

You should really consider finishing this. It's by far the best bro/sis incest fic I've found. (:

Finish?

Great story. Hope you finish it someday. Are you recovering after your accident?

Gramps

The best story yet I have found here. Great plot, great story, awesome writing. I enjoy the way you me intrigued to the next few hours and days. Hope you are or will be working on more chapters, hours and days. Thanks for submitting.

AWESOME story please finish the rest of the month and don't leave us hanging.

BRAVA!!!

These two episodes are among the very best I've read on Literotica--and that's SAYING something! You're a very talented writer, ZooeyAudrey, and I'm looking forward to enjoying more of your work. In the meantime, I want you to know that "30 Days" has given an old man a lot of pleasure. Thanks so much!

good so far

i find the guy is so desperate. ex gf fucked some other guy a day before and here he is lusting for her..

nice

Will there be any more

you got me

this very good ,hope u continue with more chapters

Please Sir May We Have Some More?

we need more chapters....(taps vien's in arms like a druggy).......lol

let's see day 3.

so far so good. nice bit with the friend and "selfish. Who Will wake who up 1st.

Nice Chapter Two

Well done - look forward to more.

:D

I absolutely love the detailed encounters because not many stories here are detailed.
i think I'm in love with your stories!

I need more

This story is wonderful, from chapter 1 to this one, we need more, please write chapter 4!

Awesome Stuff

I am loving this. Great stuff. I hate to nick pick but one part that threw me a bit was they started eating their sandwiches in bed at like 12, then at 3, she took the plate. Did they really sit there for three hours eating a sandwich and talking? Just seemed like a curious time lapse is all.

Can't wait for the next one. I did see a comment that you were in an accident. I hope all is well.

Guys, you are AWESOME! And more IS coming!

Thank you for all your wonderful and entirely flattering comments. I'm sorry it's been so long, but things happen and...c'est la vie. I am going to continue this story because it's one that I loved working up in my head, and I definitely want to get it all written down. A lot of this story (and the rest of it) is going to be folded into a larger project that contains several story ideas all wrapped up in one. But for you guys, I will post the grounded kids stories here on their own. Thank all you guys again, I hope I don't make you wait too long. :-) But, hey, there's a whole form of sex dedicated to waiting......

More more more

please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter , great story

OH MY GAWD !!!!!!!

this is so hot.!!! as i read its like i am with them while they are talking.GOOD JOB!!!!!

I love this story. I am grateful that you are continuing this story and personally can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you for your stories and I wait with baited breath for the next chapter.

Great series

Can't wait to read more. I like the pacing and how the relationship is building. Very hot stuff

great story

Sorry about the rating. I bumped the 1 star and now It won't let me change it

hope this is continued and they have sex

Damn

I want more

more

You need to finish this up, it's awesome!

Please don't let this be the end

27 days to go yet

Please keep going, soon if you can.

please finish it

We want more of it