All Comments on 'Contest 69'

Well, you don't mess around with things like plot, setting and character do you?

Not a bad short piece of erotica, and a nice idea with a great title - alot of readers will click this.

The workman-like description of oral sex in the first two paragraphs let it down for me somewhat. The rest of the story was much better written.

Somewhat short dont you think?

I really liked how you jumped right in though.

A little bit of background would go far,

And furthering the story would be amazing.

Ok short version,

TOO SHORT! I didn't even get hard reading this.

It's pretty good

Not too short, not too long, but just right. . .

I am a first timer with this author. Gonna jump to his list of submissions to see if any other little gems are stashed there.

It was short for a reason... A 69 contest between two lovers. I GET IT!!! A great short read. Thanx!!!

short and sweet!