We're Screwed Ch. 02

fanfuckingtastic

More, more, more!!!! loved it.

Five out of Five!

The title says it all. Great Job!

Great Story

Another great story, very interesting can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks for your time and effort.

TEASE.....

I've been waiting toooo long fer this to come out & now its finally out what do I get???
A tease story?
WTF?
Good story man...but puleaze....GET TO DA FUCKIN & DA PREGGY!!!!!
FAST!!!!FASTER!!!

DAMMIT!! I'M A FAN DUDE!!!

-Alain F.

Love it.

I'm a fan of your Beauty and the Geek storyline, and became excited to see that you wrote something more in my "kink".
I've loved your buildup and the teasing. I love your characters and I certainly can't wait for the sex. I know it's gonna be great.

Thanks

Thank You for the start of a good story. Will wait for the next installment.

Great Story...

Loved the way you have started this series. Eagerly waiting for more. I don't want just sex between these two characters, they have so much more than sex.

Wow, that was great. A really hot story with an actual plot is quite a rarity. The story of Madison and Nathan is very interesting, please keep writing

wow this is so good, cant wait for more!

Wow

love this story will be watching for the next chapters. Maddy and Nathan really need to be together

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

So good!

Keep writing please! This is a great story!

Best!

Pls post the next chapter soon

WOW WOW WOW

Love this story plz more soon can't wait

in the words of the legendary ms britney spears....
gimme gimme more!!!

One of the bet stories i have ever read!!! You must keep writing, you really do have a talent for it.

Next Chapter

please hurry and make the next chapter this is a good story.

Good story

This is good, i would love to see Millie try (and fail) to get Nathan back. good for drama. Post soon!!!

Amazing!

i have read lots and lots of Step-sister/brother erotic stories... but this one is by far the best story i have ever read. please don't deny to us the rest of the story, please continue!!!

yes

enthralling! need more! :)

Morrreeeeeeeee!

When will you post "We're Screwed Chp.3?
I'VE BEEN WATING SOOOOOO LOOONG FOR IT!
DUDE, YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME.....FINISH IT please......
- Alain

Omfg

Man please p0st the next chapter alrdy dude im w8ing too looong for this im dying to read. WE'RE SCREWED CH3 mann plz post it

CHP.3 BETTER BE GOOD MAN......

......'cos we've all waited this long fer it.

Don't pull a "Jim Flavortang" on us dude.

Waiting......

Please, Where Is It?

CHAPTER THREEEEE!!!!!
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
Chapter 3;
CHAPTER THREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

great series

loved the first two installments. I'll add my voice to the masses, bring us the next chapter!

I see their jealousy pushing their desires even higher!

Chapter 3!!!!

Dude, you have to release chapter 3 already!! It's killing all of us!! Haha

3

CHAPTER THREE....
ITS BEEN A WHOLE 3 MONTHS ALREADY DUDE......

Chapter 3, Chapter III, Chapter Three!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hope it is coming REAL soon!

I'm Number 3......

Please......GIVE US THREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

I'm losing it here.....anybody feel meee??

i know u posted BATG ch. 21 but are u going to do any more of we're screwed? we are all waiting for it!!!

Come on! Give us more!

Hey you are a good writer and it's a fine story. Please more! And ASAP!

More

Great writing! Emotional, passionate and incredibly hot! Please keep it going and soon!

good stuff

please keep it coming, a good story so far, I will be interested to see where you take it.

I am feeling you. Let's see Nathan fall for Madison please. Please update this story soon.

you CANNOT end it here...

this could be a great story about how she gets him back from millie, but you need to make more of it, it took you 9 days to make the second one after the first, you need to add more to this, i have already fallen for maddy myself, but this will not stand you must bring more to the story!! good job writing, my book has only a little more pollish on it, im sure you've seen it... or heard of it, but if there's 2 chapters of this and im this into it, you might want to get a small time editor, and begin writing NOVELS along these lines.

Best Work I've Ever Seen

Keep up the great work. There aren't a lot of authors like you who write amazing stories. Great job, and I hope the next installment will be great!

Hurrrrryyyyy pleaseee

Please hurry with thenext chapter!

how long

How long are we gonna have to wait for the next chapter. Can't wait for more.

Are you going to update

I love this story n I've been waiting for an update for awhile now but it doesn't seem like its gonna get updates anything time soon

You have to admit, everyone wants to hear more. Any thoughts on when the next chapters coming?!?!

next chapter?

I love love love this story.. but seriously, why do people write an amazing story and then abandon it. we are screaming and begging for more! please another chapter !

OMG!!!!

Please please please PLEASE dont end this story, its amazing and so hot. please dont stop!

Really enjoy your work. Keep at it....especially pt 3 of this story.

Please more!

This story is excellent. Please continue it! Your readers are waiting!

Anti-parent trap

Solution to issue is obvious - siblings should sow discord and ruin parent's marriage, so that they divorce. Then, the step-siblings will not be step-siblings any longer, and they can date with no stigma.

Nice pacing

Great character development, just hot enough to push the envelope, but really more of a romantic drama.
J