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man bad luck
wow she is having like the shittiest month ever. great story though cant wait to read more.
i like it
i really like it, want her and tommy to get together though!
ALWAYS LEAVE THEM WAITING AND WONDERING
DOUBLE L, GOOD STORY SO FAR....SEEMS LIKE THIS GIRLs LIFE MIRRORS THE MOVIE ABOUT BLONDES. TK U MLJ LV NV
Loving it
but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee, longer chapters :(((
Yes
Longer chapters plea! Way too short but loving it so far
Again, you have some grammatical errors and you are using some words incorrectly (I believe you meant 'scarred' and not 'sacred' when describing the bathroom walk-in). If you would break and find an editor, I truly believe the quality of your work would vastly improve. It would make the stories that much easier to comprehend and enjoy; right now, I feel like I am playing Mad Libs with your stories. 3 stars from me!
Highly unlikely
I don't believe in any of these people. Should be in the science fiction section.
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